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prisma palm
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Some things resist the need for words—
like footprints erased by the whispering tide,
like crumpled pages of poems never written. 😭 🔥

grim carbon
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Beautiful one ♡

vague rain
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Dang... that is so wonderfully pretty

turbid tree
narrow tinsel
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Short yet quite simple. This is wonderfully well written and very beautiful. I like this one 😊

turbid tree
summer oxide
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Definitely not! I followed this poem hoping to get back to it later haha..

Your use of similies and metaphors are really evocative in displaying that beauty lives not in things that show off, but from the insides. Your short expressive structure of sentences makes this poem very straightforward in term of reason, while the display of sentences are beautiful! Much like your expressive figurative language, so does your vocabulary contest! - for it to be vivid, especially with the ars poetica! Nice use of repetition, enjambments and ceasuras! I enjoyed this poem, and its grand title! Thanks for pinging and sharing this with me!NoizeLoves NoizeLoves NoizeLoves

turbid tree
turbid tree
tawny cedar
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This one is quite pretty thank you for sharing ❤️

carmine elk
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This poem beautifully captures the power of silence and unspoken connections. Your imagery is vivid and evocative, making the emotions linger

turbid tree
raven hull
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The final stanza really stands out to me as quite pretty.

I like the idea here, and as an artist who is constantly trying to figure out what I want to say, I feel a peculiar tension between my desire to mine my unexplored emotions and my desire to simply accept them and live more in the moment.

I find a lot of beauty in creating art, but a meta-mind stalks me, keeping me from the present while holding my thoughts suspended between past and future.

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sturdy birch
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That's the sweetest thing I have read this week. Amazing imagery. I can really see it as I am reading. And the way you beautiful convey deep thoughts that we all have is really remarkable.

turbid tree
jade solstice
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rough dagger
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It's so beautiful and good! I loved it ♥️