#The Sea Of Solitary

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frigid cove
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The Sea Of Solitary
Eons of the crashing waves
Forsake the tale of the brave.
Admits the everlasting cloudiness
Abiding slumber saw unsteadiness.
Blue strokes of heavy outcast
Drowning solitary will ever-last.

Deep, desolate, such inky ocean
A child enslaved in lush motion.
Comfortless in the dire emptiness
Hopelessness killed my happiness.
Light concealed by the tenebrosity
I’m choking on eternal brutality.

The sea of solitary, such obscurity
Such a magnetic aura exotic to me.
One who’s lone will die here alone
Even stars will perish as unknown.
Thorns of the lorn scaring profound
Leave me dissipating in muted sound.

A curse form, of an immortal god
All my past bliss, eventually forgot.
A vacancy erasing senses of retreat
Will my suffering admit my defeat?
My ship sunk for these longing maims
Will I evade all these frigid remains?

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@pale pecan

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@strange crow

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@finite hamlet

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@gusty igloo

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@shut grove

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@granite lichen

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@hasty copper

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@wise marten

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@idle tundra

shut grove
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Nice poem

frigid cove
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@small warren

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@humble orchid

shut grove
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Are there gonna be more?

frigid cove
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@hard sparrow

shut grove
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Ocean like poems

frigid cove
pale pecan
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“Like a curse form an immortal god” was that meant to be that way on purpose?

frigid cove
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It’s from

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Ahhh typo

pale pecan
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mhm, knew it

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however if you want, that doesn’t sound too bad on paper

frigid cove
pale pecan
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you could do something like,
“A curse form; an immortal god” or

“A curse form—an immortal god”

This would be comparing the form of said curse to well, a god. signifying that it can’t be broken.

frigid cove
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It’s from not form

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It’s a typo

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Oh

pale pecan
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but you could still make form work similarly

frigid cove
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Can I just use a comma

frigid cove
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A curse form, of an immortal god

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All my past bliss, eventually forgot.

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Wait that’s a lot better

pale pecan
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If you did wanna go that route id say smth like “A curse in form of an immortal god.”

frigid cove
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I like your method better tho

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Thanks!

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Is the overall theme good?

pale pecan
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Mhm, I like it

pale pecan
frigid cove
frigid cove
pale pecan
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I usually just write abt love

frigid cove
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I haven’t experienced love yet

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So I won’t write about it yet

idle tundra
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Eons of the crashing waves
Forsake the tale of the brave.
Admits the everlasting cloudiness
Abiding slumber saw unsteadiness.
Blue strokes of heavy outcast
Drowning solitary will ever-last.
beautiful

strange crow
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nice

hard sparrow
# frigid cove <@456226577798135808>

What I'd like to point out here is how much the text demands that we allow ourselves to feel “suffocated” by the waves of the sea, while semiotics strengthens our performance and guides us towards tranquillity.

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It's almost like an addition to the analytical descriptions and to the evidence of a depression that takes us against the force of the current - the symbolism of which is laid out here with a resistant depth.

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There's nothing predictable about the rhymes, but the compartmentalization of sensations that encompasses us when we let ourselves understand it for ourselves - and what might have motivated you to write it.

small warren
# frigid cove The Sea Of Solitary Eons of the crashing waves Forsake the tale of the brave. Ad...

This poem reads like an ocean-bound soul adrift in the haunting beauty of solitude. Each line crashes like a wave, full of that aching, endless depth—a call from a place only the truly solitary know. The imagery is stunning, painting solitude not just as emptiness but as something profoundly alive, breathing both beauty and heartbreak. It’s like an echo of something we’ve all felt but couldn’t quite describe, a loneliness that feels almost sacred. You've captured that beautifully painful truth: even amidst the darkest, deepest waters, there's a strange allure to the unknown. Absolutely haunting and powerful.

frigid cove