“Ode” my best poem so far

[humble flame]

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[thorn mason]

Very unique style! The repetition emphasizes the deep meaning of regret and perhaps even obsession towards this « darling ». I couldn’t quite grasp the context behind it all fully well, but it is quite interesting indeed. Slow readers like me might struggle a bit with understanding amidst all the répétitions though😭

[hollow flax]

For context it is about my best friend