Justify This!

[river vigil]

Hi guys. Pls rate my poem from 1-10. I may have gotten a bit too personal and true about this :))
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[south karma]

I don’t know how to rank poems on a 1-10 scale, but I can say I enjoyed reading it. It’s got a cavalier attitude while still feeling thoughtful. Rather it’s emotional core is strong but the language has something punk about it.

[hasty carbon]

this is amazing

[cobalt swan]

1. 10/10 would recommend
2. What is your creative process?? Omgeezus
3. I loved the vibes as well as the tone that which you've evoked.

[silent umbra]

This is really good! I like the theme of the poem and the way you wrote it:)

[river vigil]

@pliant mica

[toxic pollen]

Hey!

5 @s is the limit!

[pliant mica]

In quiet halls

In stone to crumble ….

3rd line some rephrasing

4th line too. May tweak

[river vigil]

Oops, I didn't know. I'm still quite new to this server. My apologies ❤️

[pliant mica]

3rd para 4th line. These not required

[toxic pollen]

No worries!

[pliant mica]

Last para 3rd n 4th. May revisit to finish it at a great note

Lovely attempt. Thanks for writing ✍️

Truth comes out unapologetically

So enjoyed every bit

[river vigil]

Thank you so much for your honest review of my poem. I'll make sure to apply these in my future poems!! :))

[hasty vigil]

Wonderful! @river vigil has just pregressed to level 2!

[pliant mica]

I’m sorry if I was harsh