Know me, know me not

[regal trail]

the concluding lines are compelling but you could consider a clearer resolution of the narrators journey to really convey the complexity of self perception

i think it would be a hard for a reader to connect or understand what you are talking abt

i like the play on knowing someone being a way to love someone

[agile spade]

*i like the play on

knowing someone being a

way to love someone*

- a lilypad's odyssey

[regal trail]

not sure if its intentional

and your metaphors and imagery go above and beyond honestly

[lofty grotto]

aw, thank you so much ^^

[lofty grotto]

mm yeah