Rhodios Iris (gandalf and yui)

[winged locust]

@dense fog

[dense fog]

AYY WE GOT IT

We should tag people i think💀💀

[winged locust]

Yeah yeah

You do

[dense fog]

😭oh okay

Who do you mostly tag?

Ill do it tomorrow alright ill sleep now

[winged locust]

Lmao 🌚

Ok.

@formal moon

@warped pumice

@jagged cave

@sterile matrix

@versed night

@hushed kernel

@bleak flare

@mild current

I am forgetting bruhhhhh

@tribal abyss

@formal moon

[dense fog]

Lol

@wispy ledge

@frank hare

@spice raft

[winged locust]

@trim hinge

[dense fog]

@burnt quarry

@deep creek

[winged locust]

@keen silo

@oak relic

[dense fog]

@placid cloud

@vital pecan

[winged locust]

Q?

[deep creek]

Yo

Yo

[dense fog]

LOL HI

[deep creek]

me gonna read ...

[winged locust]

Yo

[deep creek]

:>>>

[dense fog]

Whas weong with q?

[dense fog]

Aww thankss

[deep creek]

tagged a million peopel

[dense fog]

@balmy jay

[uncut dune]

💤 | dolosiansleepyhead went afk 5 hours and 56 seconds ago.
Their AFK status is: AFK

[dense fog]

@proven breach 👀

[winged locust]

Nvm, I thought it was someone else.

[tribal abyss]

You forgot your bestie Priest

[dense fog]

I did itt just noww jehehe

[tribal abyss]

Ohh here lmao

[deep creek]

rai bow mentioned

[dense fog]

Reall

[winged locust]

Your keyboard 😭😭😭😭

[dense fog]

I dont really tag people i just let my poems get lost💀💀

Im forgetting someone i can tell

[winged locust]

@deep ridge

[deep creek]

rai bow mentioned

What fhe

My is broken

[dense fog]

@harsh harness

[deep creek]

no its not

What the hell

[dense fog]

Sure why not

Lol

[deep creek]

TAG EVERYONE

IN EXISTENCE

[winged locust]

🌚 definitely

[dense fog]

lol @ everyone

[deep creek]

wheres santa

Did ya @ santa

[dense fog]

Oh rigjt

@magic abyss

@rustic void

[winged locust]

@rustic void

Lol

[deep creek]

Who need to read

[dense fog]

Idk this about it i think

[winged locust]

Should be enough for now.

Oh @next island

[dense fog]

For now he says💀

[deep creek]

should be an @ tag le whole server

[dense fog]

Being so old you can just ping the owner is crazy work

[deep creek]

Bros older then the owner

Bros ancient

Older then greece

older then time itself

[spice raft]

it exists, but would be a bad idea

[winged locust]

I am like older than him, irl and serverly

[dense fog]

Lol

[deep creek]

It exists

[dense fog]

How are you olfer than the server

[deep creek]

Le owner is a child

[winged locust]

Dude, why are you telling that!

[deep creek]

Le owner ks a childh

Wait....

[dense fog]

Crazy how you get summoned by mention of rule break and not tag

[winged locust]

The owner, at least for papt.

[deep creek]

ouh....gheres an @ everyone

[dense fog]

Whos the og owner

[winged locust]

Esra

[deep creek]

The owner is a child

[winged locust]

I dare not ping her.

[deep creek]

Whi gave

[hushed kernel]

Sam

[dense fog]

I thought they were the same person lol

[deep creek]

Esra who

[dense fog]

Ping ping

[winged locust]

He is the... Founder?

[dense fog]

PING

PING

[hushed kernel]

Yeah

[deep creek]

WHEAT

[winged locust]

Nope.

[deep creek]

WHEAT PING ESRA

[dense fog]

💀💀

[hushed kernel]

Shes busy

[winged locust]

OYE NO

[deep creek]

WHEAT YOU HAVE TO DO IT

okay

No pinging

Bwry busy person

Yuh got it

Gonna fry us alive and eat us for dinner

[dense fog]

What does she do anyways

[deep creek]

Eat kids

[dense fog]

😭

[deep creek]

:>

[dense fog]

She might

[hushed kernel]

Irl

[winged locust]

coughs heavily

[dense fog]

Yea What?

[deep creek]

Bery accurate

[hushed kernel]

Irl busy

[deep creek]

irl busy with that

Woth that

Filleting kids

[dense fog]

With what(

[hushed kernel]

…

[deep creek]

Frying kids

[winged locust]

Whybis there a meow beside your name.

[dense fog]

Lol

[deep creek]

click it

click it to find out

[dense fog]

Whats aschelydia

[winged locust]

Virus.

No thanks.

[dense fog]

And how can you be a member

[dense fog]

😭

[deep creek]

dyjng

[spice raft]

Fair enough

[deep creek]

Its the after life

[spice raft]

I was summoned by the tag. Was just observing this whole time

[deep creek]

i know

.

:>>>

[dense fog]

🥰🥰🥰

[deep creek]

could see ya lurking

in le shadows

[hushed kernel]

Guild

[deep creek]

Okay sk we have established wheat and LolR

[spice raft]

[winged locust]

@spice raft pin it

[deep creek]

Theyres both grandpa

[spice raft]

it is pinned

by wes

[dense fog]

😭😭😭i apologize

[winged locust]

Ok.

[deep creek]

Wheat

wheats dead

[spice raft]

Alr, this is still a poem post

Lets not clog it up

[deep creek]

Ya

[spice raft]

with all this

[dense fog]

😞

[deep creek]

were clogging it up

[spice raft]

We need room for feedback

[deep creek]

Feedback line starts

[spice raft]

and all this yap can be done in off topic

[deep creek]

----------------------------------------here

perfectly aligned

[dense fog]

Very kewl poem 10/10 would recommend, the person the guy collabed with might be he next wordsworth tbh, i wonder who that yui person is? Seems talented

[deep creek]

https://tenor.com/view/furina-approves-gif-14393617851646262056

[winged locust]

🌚

[dense fog]

That shar guy seems okay too

NO

LMAOO

[winged locust]

Nope

[dense fog]

Read our poem😭

We should leave smh

[winged locust]

That chat went a little off topic tho.

Not anymore

🌚

[deep creek]

https://tenor.com/view/genshin-impact-furina-dancing-glowstick-cheering-gif-108425810148791440

[winged locust]

It is pinned

[deep creek]

https://tenor.com/view/furina-excited-genshin-impact-cute-happy-gif-6959110752502270422

[formal moon]

Will u?

[winged locust]

Rose, what are you doing?

Like this gif wise

[deep creek]

https://tenor.com/view/furina-furina-genshin-furina-goodnight-goodnight-genshin-goodnight-gif-17365082271986329717

[winged locust]

@steady anvil

[frank hare]

this a diff level of poetry hats off

[balmy jay]

Nope

When i saw spring, i knew it was over.

Bro am i reading a book from the 1980's by the greatest Poets ever?

Solid 10/10, these gave me vibes of Shakespearen Imagery.

[rustic void]

A very unique mix. Makes one question the true meaning of a rainbow. It really analyzes into ones hopes and dreams and when they slowly start to fade. Very interesting

[winged locust]

Little detail: first spring is Capital. No other season is capital.

[winged locust]

Aw thanks

[winged locust]

@silver umbra

@mellow mural

[dense fog]

RIGHT?! Thas what i was getting attt

[dense fog]

@broken vigil

[uncut dune]

👋 | @dense fog, Welcome back!

You've been away for 44 minutes and 51 seconds. How was your sleep?
Your afk status was: getting tortured in the 9th circle of hell(in class)

[dense fog]

@peak herald

[broken vigil]

Hope it ends soon not its

Either use rain leaves or rains leave (depending on your preference) saying rains leaves is a bit off putting.

Tears to freely flow not tears freely to flow

What was in pink must now leave the red flow.
What must now bloom is the divine death, so soon.
For so long, over rainbows, her mind kept fluttering.
Not
So now what was in pink must left the red flow.
What must now bloom just the divine death so soon.
For so long over the rainbows, her mind kept fluttering.

Hope this helps 😊

[winged locust]

Oh thanks, this slipped out minds.

[winged locust]

Intended.

[winged locust]

Intended

Rest will be corrected 🌚😇

[winged locust]

@formal moon shar here

[bleak flare]

the flow is very nice and format is beautiful great job you two

[vital pecan]

@dense fog
Finally got around to reading this one

I absolutely adore the language and flow of this poem, and with the use of powerful metaphors it is elevated to a whole new level. As is the case with most of such (as I like to call it) "high art", I have trouble discovering the meaning - yet, it feels as a story of change trough the symbols of the seasons - beginning with spring and ending with winter.

The poem establishes the character of the "Lady of pink" at the beginning, and we then watch her person deteriorating trough each season. As animals migrate to warmer spaces before winter, she stays at the same space, in the awful, sad autumn. We end in winter, with the complete despair and sorrow of the lady, as mirrored by the season.

[winged locust]

@distant osprey

[distant osprey]

dangg

[keen silo]

Bro who th are u

Oh

Dami?

[winged locust]

🌚

You forgot your brother?