Glimpses of the bygone past

[novel ivy]

Detached from the overworld
immersed in fantasies in front of me
Running with joys untold
Detached me loves this world

Walls and stories of fantasy
They are as real as real to me
I descend into the fantasy
Forgetting the overworld

People I see and not talk
But they are as memorable
More memorable than those
Who no longer ponder and talk

The Fun me and others had
We took those worlds seriously
Sadness, happiness, death and glory
as pleasing as wins in the overworld

I would stay in reverie or in fantasy
Those were times of no worries
excited about what's ahead
And not beating up past me

Those worlds gave me memories
Fragrant with euphoric scent
One thought and a thousand feelings
But I have left those worlds

Whenever I remember
My mind surges with rapture
I have loved them dearly
My heart wishes again to capture

Capture those memories
Which instilled life in me
For once again, I want to forget
And dwell into those fantasies

Those which gave me awe
Never gave me bitter images
Kept giving me ecstasy
Always made me to thaw flaw

Echoes from the past I hear
Emotions from heart I feel
Being reminiscent of past so dear
I want my life to be that clear

[novel ivy]

@prime basin

[prime basin]

I really like the depth to the poem... It's so lovely ❤️

[novel ivy]

Thank you!

[novel ivy]

@radiant gulch

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[novel ivy]

@wild kindle

@heady quarry
you can check this out, when you want

[wild kindle]

Ok this poem and the title is really nice and it is well written from what I can tell but that line "They are as real as real to me" idk if im feeling that

[novel ivy]

It was intentional

I am mixing the real twice
It does not fit as a rhyme piece, but it has strong meaning

it is as real as real world to me
the realness is so equal that it is same
this real and that real is same

[wild kindle]

Oh ok got it

[novel ivy]

@trail timber
I think you will like this one more

[trail timber]

Oooh, expansive

I'll give it a go

[trail timber]

I'm asking, no, I beg of you, format this into something I can read, be kind to my plea?

[novel ivy]

it just has many spaces
but I will try

[chrome crystal]

I really really like the stylye of ur wording! its rlly deep and looks to have a story behind it, and it looks like it can be relatable to many people, my only problem is the spaces and its kinda hard to read but that can be simple fix! overall its a rlly nice poemm!

[novel ivy]

Yeah I will space it well

[novel ivy]

Thank you for your valuable feedback!

[novel ivy]

I have spaced it correctly now, the poem is about missing the past fun,the vibes and emotions.
I think you get it?

[hollow cedar]

Interesting rhythm of the poem! Some lines are rhyming while others arent, perhaps signalling something that happened in the past but no longer in the present~

[novel ivy]

yeah, it seems that It not very possible for me to feel like of those times
they were the best, some simple decisions could have changed my life so much!

[novel ivy]

and yes
Sometimes my poems do not rhyme, in that case I might be trying to create a deep meaning there

[hollow cedar]

Thanks for sharing! Thats the fun of interpreting poems!

[novel ivy]

I must thank you for the feedback!

[radiant gulch]

nice, i want a narration for this

[novel ivy]

hmm
Pretty counterintuitive to think

[novel ivy]

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[graceful sorrel]

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