#Unspoken Love

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distant path
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I held onto hope like a fragile thread,
Each smile, each glance—a world in disguise.
But the day came when all the warmth had fled,
And I saw the truth staring in her eyes.

She laughed with someone else in the hall,
The way I thought she’d only laugh with me.
Every whispered hope began to fall,
Like shattered stars sinking in a sea.

I watched them walk, her hand in his,
And it tore the dream I’d built apart.
All the moments I thought I’d never miss
Now burned like fire inside my heart.

I wondered, “Was I ever really there?
Did she ever see me, even for a while?”
But the silence answered my desperate prayer,
And her absence spoke louder than her smile.

I tried to brush it off, to let it go,
But each memory clung to me like rain.
Her voice, her touch—things I’d never know—
Echoed in my chest like quiet pain.

The world said, “We told you from the start.”
But it didn’t ease the ache in my chest.
I had loved her with every piece of my heart,
Only to find I was second, at best.

So, I swallowed the tears and wore a grin,
Pretending I hadn’t lost it all.
But inside, I crumbled deep within,
Knowing she never felt my fall.

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@fringe oak

fringe oak
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:<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

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SEDJF

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LIFE

distant path
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@tame jasper

lone saddle
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Mann should've made the move earlier

wanton wharf
# distant path I held onto hope like a fragile thread, Each smile, each glance—a world in disgu...

Alright, so here we have the guy realizing the truth - all of his madness was one-sided; not only that, it was completely ignored and meant for another man. This crumples his reality that he had built for himself completely, shatters his life. Yet trough it, he tries to hold himself together, piece back together the broken pieces of his heart. He finally realized that his opportunity has been missed, and now she already has a lover.
Although he seems to be holding himself strong, the poem gives off the feeling that the boy is barely keeping it together, creating yet another delusion in his mind in order to prevent him from breaking.

novel moth
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😭 cries

clear bay
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you oscillate between deep lines and explicit surface level exposition. i think you should try to make it with a better flow so it doesn't look so jarring.

limpid otterBOT
snow pond
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HADES WHY DO YOU HATE US SO

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so beautifully painful

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i FEEL like i am in the poem

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no, I AM the man in the poem

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forced to realized it was never mutual