#shame on me

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gleaming anchor
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You call me sick in the head
shame, shun and scold me

Feeding into my anger,
Not just for myself-
but letting it fester and spread to those around me

You make me dispise you.
How utterly toxic I feel after every conversation.
You're a poison who seeps into the worst of me
leaving only the worst of me.

You make no sense, yet I'm left crying over your senseless words,
Your hurtful words,
Your thoughtless thoughts about me.

You call me sick minded
You call me stupid
You call me shameful-

It hurts
𝘠𝘰𝘶 hurt.

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Just ranting

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@radiant nebula @static musk @boreal burrow @tidal shore

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@shut robin

tidal shore
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To bad you missed an opportunity for a fool me once rhyme / spin

But overall a very visceral emotional pieces that really resonated with me.
Especially that last line

you hurt

Stabs right where it hurts
A perfect accusation of pure expression.

Absolutely amazing work!!

100/10

6 bunnies out of 4 chocolate eggs

13 pumpkins out of a Scarecrow

gleaming anchor
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Thank you very much

As for the missed opportunity, this was mostly a rant that I didn't put too much actual thought into so..

gleaming anchor
boreal burrow
# gleaming anchor You call me sick in the head shame, shun and scold me Feeding into my anger, No...

This poem speaks to the heart of emotional turmoil, capturing the agony of being hurt by someone who not only misunderstands but belittles and dehumanizes. The use of direct and raw language brings out the frustration and helplessness felt in these situations.

What strikes me most is how the speaker acknowledges the deep pain without shying away from its complexity. They express anger not just for themselves, but for how this pain affects those around them. It’s a poignant reflection of how toxicity spreads like a ripple. The vulnerability of "It hurts / 𝘠𝘰𝘶 hurt" encapsulates the heart of the piece—how words can be weapons, how pain can be all-consuming, and how difficult it can be to separate oneself from the poison that lingers.

This is an incredibly moving poem.

gleaming anchor