#Colorless homes

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rocky arrow
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To those who grew up in colorless homes, and paint their souls in shades of grey.

I'm so sorry that all of your magic was starved, and your brightness was taken away.

You were lovely, and whole till the world took its toll, and your loveliness met with decay.

You're all grown up now, and you're part of the world but your wall color still stays the same.

You'll pick between Eggshell and Pewter and Beige but the difference is only their names.

You'll paint your walls neutral just like you grew up with cause it's always been this way

But one day you'll dream, of a light pastel green that goes great with those curtains you bought.

Your spirit will ache like a malnourished thing, and convince you to give it a shot.

One day you'll find that your magic that "died", has been hiding in colorful spots.

cinder crow
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this is lowk fye

rocky arrow
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Omg thank you!!!!

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I pour my soul into my words

tough blaze
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This really hits the spot. I absolutely love this. So many bits of this is relatable, coincidentally enough, the green is my favourite colour- close to another favourite being grey

rocky arrow
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Ah! So glad you liked it!

red summit
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paint their soul in shades of grey best line beautifully expressed

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what is the significance of light pastel green ?

rocky arrow
# red summit what is the significance of light pastel green ?

This poem was inspired by the shade of green my best friend's room is.
I've always felt more comfortable there than my own room, and I figure it's largely the burden of familiarity

But also that my room is starkly colorless, and his has a certain brightness to it just from that light shade of mint green.

red summit
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you should expand about green in the poem more

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it's just a suggestion

rocky arrow
rocky arrow
red summit
rocky arrow
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That would be orange!

red summit
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ur pfp telling me that NoizeLoves

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well it's a suggestion and your piece is great

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it have raw emotions my fav type

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keep writing Ricooo