#Gone Too Soon

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frigid oracle
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The sun still rises, but it feels dim,
The world keeps turning, though it feels grim.
A friend, once here, now gone away,
No words can fill the void today.

Laughter shared, now echoes faint,
Memories linger, soft and quaint.
In every smile, in every tear,
A piece of you will still be near.

Though you're no longer by my side,
Your spirit in my heart will bide.
I’ll carry you through every dawn,
In quiet moments, you’ll live on.

Gone too soon, yet always here,
In every thought, forever dear.
I’ll hold your memory close and tight,
A guiding star through endless night.

untold fulcrum
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beautfiul poem, very flowy

valid dove
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Your AABB rhythm is beautifully explored as usual, and the wordplay depicts such vivid imageries!SaberSaysPretty

frigid oracle
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well i wrote this piece as a tribute

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to my friend who lost his life yesterday in a road accident

valid dove
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SobbinTheLanaDelReyOut my condolences. Your homage pays tribute

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