#The Deer

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subtle furnace
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@lone brook

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patent mortar
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Mmmm nice quatrains~ as usual, the imageries of the deer, its environment and motifs are fun and mind-trickling HAHA~ The wordplay is intriguing as well!

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subtle furnace
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@slow ingot

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@upper hearth

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@normal vigil

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@native loom

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@shadow maple

subtle furnace
# subtle furnace

The subject matter revolves around a deer in a serene forest setting, emphasizing its relationship with nature, the emotional landscape it navigates, and its quest for pride and happiness.The poem explores the journey of a deer as a metaphor for courage, self-discovery, and the pursuit of joy and love against the backdrop of nature. It highlights themes of freedom, the beauty of the natural world, and the importance of embracing one's true passion despite fears and uncertainties.

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@lucid basalt

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@modern perch

carmine sun
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This was peaceful to read, I love the vivid imagery in it

lucid basalt
# subtle furnace

The poem explores themes of freedom, nature, and the pursuit of passion. The deer symbolizes a wild spirit that yearns to break free from constraints and live authentically.

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Through vivid imagery and powerful symbolism, you invite the reader to contemplate the importance of living freely and pursuing one's passions.

subtle furnace
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@compact viper

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@calm violet