#Twisted Dance!

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snow spear
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Devil's grimace-envelops power: tempting
duly-weak minds, gracing-leverage attempts,
damned-grand ballroom of hell's contempt.

Serenading: dance! meticulous-assurance,
solely does serenity; swallowed, snaring,
snapping: bones solely-shatters; shattering.

"Beauty lies in the human body, when every
singular segment is explored! So GO! Explore,
dissect, crease, dismember! Have fun!"

Dance! Dance! Dance! Twisted-beauty!
Leap, Rise, Fall! Taking Satan's hands,
Then! Let Bloodied ballrooms lay bloody.

snow spear
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@gilded knoll @dry briar @whole dove

snow spear
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@indigo relic would like ur feedback tooSaberSaysPretty

indigo relic
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I return

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Woah

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Is there a name for this style or is it just your personal thing?

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I like it

languid phoenixBOT
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*Is there a name for

this style or is it just

your personal thing?*

indigo relic
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It's powerful

indigo relic
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@snow spear this should probably be in the sensitive poem section tho

snow spear
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Oops

snow spear
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The hyphenation or the prose intregration

indigo relic
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The first line of the first two stanzas

indigo relic
snow spear
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Oh

indigo relic
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But I'ma need you to explain them for everyone else in chat

snow spear
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Adding hyphens (-) or
Prose (".......") aka story telling

indigo relic
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Adding the colons

snow spear
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Oh

indigo relic
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lol

snow spear
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Colons just to introduce "examples" of the prev line

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Punctuation playsamazedkittyanimated

mental ravine
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I’m new to poetry, but this piece sounded pretty cool to me.

snow spear