#In My Loving Memory

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main shoal
main shoal
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@royal orbit

supple elbow
# main shoal

Woah what type of poetry it is?? It's very catchy and fascinating to me SaberSaysPretty
It's like one para is just words to show what you mean but then next para is like you elaboratimg what you feel (as per my understanding SobbinTheLanaDelReyOut )
I love the last para so muchhhjhj
I wished for a moment, yet fate has other plans.
No longer can we play the games you like, share with me your plans, aspirations and goals; listen to your favourite songs.
But, you won't be forgotten, we'll deal with the rest
The last line? What does it mean? Is it like the person is gone but their memory will always be with you?
Overall a very nice poem and umm this type is very new to me.
Thanks for sharing
Have a good day 👍🏻

mellow maple
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This is a good poem! I really like how it goes from describing parts of the poem on the left and then giving quotes that give more to the poem itself, it'svery interesting. I also like the structure!