And They Shall Be Mist (collab by Freyja and Rain)

[oblique prism]

@outer mango THIS WAS SO FUN

[outer mango]

YIPPEEE ENJOY READING GUYS

[oblique prism]

Ping anyone you want lol

@rough geode

FRAIN

[outer mango]

@bold drum

@icy pagoda

@winter estuary

@ancient delta

@torn hill

@noble basin

[winter estuary]

my oh my

[outer mango]

@patent gull

[oblique prism]

@plucky hazel

[outer mango]

@spice grove

@velvet monolith

@hushed pulsar

@ancient delta

@cobalt mason

[rough geode]

FRAINNN

[oblique prism]

your oh your

[winter estuary]

whimsical words!!!! i love the happy go lucky feel of this poem, from sweet saline tears to all bruise yet still unmatched it had me engaged!! great job you too!

[rough geode]

I love the wordplay and this whole thing so much!? Like wowww??????? YOU BOTH ATE THIS UP HONESTLY. The use of archaic english, the vocabulary, everything is so profound <33

[outer mango]

i owe most of the meaty vocab stuff to rain 🫡 appreciate the kind words though :3

[winter estuary]

yall mix together greatly

[oblique prism]

Interesting, what makes it happy go lucky to you

[winter estuary]

nice alchemistry

[rough geode]

Seconded

[winter estuary]

the archaic english ig 😭

and atop the clouds!

that just gives me happy feels p

[oblique prism]

like ingredients for uhh
cupcake batter!

[winter estuary]

like oxygen and flame

[rough geode]

NOW DO WE TRY A TRILLAB?? 👀

[outer mango]

DIZZY POEM

[oblique prism]

MAKE IT HAPPEN

[oblique prism]

like dogs and mud

[rough geode]

👀

[winter estuary]

pigs*

I wonder who id combo well with…..

[oblique prism]

no...
you should see how muddy my dog gets

[winter estuary]

😭

[outer mango]

very flattering guys thanks for comparing us to mud /lh

[rough geode]

LMFAO

[winter estuary]

mud of the tribals; harnessed a roof over the head in the hard times.

[oblique prism]

LITERALLY JOKING 😭😭
also the whole point is dogs love mud and they are naturally drawn to each other

like our poetry styles

✨

[outer mango]

HAHA yeah ik it's just funny at face value

"omg you're so good like uhhhhh mud"

[winter estuary]

eye candy

this 🫵

[oblique prism]

yummy yum

[winter estuary]

this is gonna be hard to outdo ‼️‼️‼️‼️

[oblique prism]

appreciated 🫶

||also challenge ACCEPTED 🫵🫵||

[winter estuary]

as always, you continue to impress

||I totally stand a chanceeeee (not)||

[wild flower]

Wonderful! @winter estuary has just pregressed to level 18!

[oblique prism]

🩷

||who knows, maybe a 💳 🌧️ collab||

[winter estuary]

||JaeRain, VisaRain, if your down i am 2||

[oblique prism]

@still grove

[still grove]

https://tenor.com/view/mishacollins-jaredpadalecki-jensenackles-jensen-jared-gif-9011291490458089513

I am here.

[oblique prism]

https://tenor.com/view/read-it-read-my-text-pay-attention-do-it-severus-snape-gif-14683770

[still grove]

The Walking Angel approves of this poem

Also, the rhyme scheme is glorious

[oblique prism]

Thank Freyja and her love of sonnets for that

[still grove]

Me and sonnets don't get along unless I'm writing them terribly wrong

[ancient delta]

This must be the most interesting collaborative poem I've seen around here, I congratulate you. The last stanza glorifies a golden air that solemnly accompanies us until it leads to a poetic and artistic image that is simply beautiful.

Congratulations to your use of language, the reproduction of feelings and the adventurousness expressed captured me. I felt trapped by the eloquence and how the verses ended up embellishing the subtlety of the metrics.

It ends up enhancing the visual and narrative identity of the two of you, without sinning in the conduction or spoiling the experience with some lack of syllabic contingency. Your chemistry as authors is commendable.

[oblique prism]

@crystal laurel

[oblique prism]

This is such a kind thing to say, ty

I don’t think I have ever seen you around

but from my side, i’ll say i really appreciate your comments

[crystal laurel]

WOAH

WOAH

that's so cool

[patent gull]

🔥 🔥 🫰

[oblique prism]

TYTY

[oblique prism]

🫶

[noble basin]

Thunder-struck iris,

petals break on wind-swept storms —

unbowed, they endure.

[quartz minnow]

*Thunder-struck iris,

petals break on wind-swept storms —

unbowed, they endure.*

- The Ethereal Bard

[oblique prism]

This is gorgeous

[plucky hazel]

OMG THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE THIS!!! The vocab is awesome! I also love the ellision, I also like the rhyme! This is absolutely amazing

[oblique prism]

Yayyyy 🩷🩷
I’m happy you like it

[velvet monolith]

YIIIIP RAINB AND FREYA POEM!

NICE POEM FOR BOTH OF YOU!

[oblique prism]

ILYYY 🥥

[oblique prism]

@vale kestrel