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nova light · 2024-09-17T16:10:44.468Z

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nova lightBOT Sep 17, 2024, 4:10 PM

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carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:18 PM

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First

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:18 PM

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ok

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:18 PM

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nova light Wonderful! <@318733619805945856> has just pregressed to **level 1**!

pregression

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:19 PM

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It's the same I'd change a few words to not interrupt the flow kinda thing

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But I like it

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I like the other one better

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:20 PM

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same

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:20 PM

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Narration file

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That's what I wanted

craggy orchid Sep 17, 2024, 4:20 PM

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carmine lily I like the other one better

That is a first 🥹 Idk whether to be proud or sad

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:20 PM

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winter aesthetic for me (even tho it had death)

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:21 PM

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This one isn't as immersive

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:21 PM

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craggy orchid That is a first 🥹 Idk whether to be proud or sad

You have a rich vocabulary I can say

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:21 PM

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I learned a new word on the other one

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Lour is cool

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:22 PM

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and like, good imagery I'd also say

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:22 PM

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What's the fancy word

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Ars poetica

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This is very that

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:22 PM

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idek what that means

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:23 PM

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It's a written piece about writing

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:23 PM

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OH YESSS

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i see it

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it is very that

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:24 PM

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We look like frauds in an art gallery

craggy orchid Sep 17, 2024, 4:24 PM

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I'm definitely stealing that

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Gonna pretend I knew it was called that from the beginning

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:24 PM

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Do it

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Yeah I definitely like the other one better, not that this is bad, but I think it's got superior devices and narrative style

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:26 PM

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yersh, and it has snow
snow is nice

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LOL

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:26 PM

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I live in Canada, so no✨

bold flower Sep 17, 2024, 4:26 PM

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Send your snow to me then

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ungrateful ugh 🙄

carmine lily Sep 17, 2024, 4:26 PM

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absolutely I will

craggy orchid Sep 17, 2024, 4:28 PM

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I guess a 'narrative file' is in order for these

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I guess I can just post it here? Do judge the fake English accent, I write everything with it. Helps me get in the write mindset.

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