-frostbite- | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

earnest ginkgo Sep 17, 2024, 10:00 AM

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Your poems are like ice:
glacial rhymes and rhetoric trace the page,
the ridged syntax and cold words play over again in my brain.

Your writings wrap my mind,
encasing my thoughts in a blizzard of snowy stories,
A storm in which only polar eyes can see-
only an icy heart can read; a heed into a frozen desert where resides your less than sentimental flurries.

I earnestly greed for a warmth away from your frostbiting freeze;
A chilling breeze always accompanies your lack of company.

I wish you'd spend more time with me...
Oh how much I miss the days you'd sweep me off my feet-

We'd dance around for hours in random fleets of flash born spontaneity,

Then we'd sit to write raging tales of explosive emotions and rapture,
I yearn for even a radiance or ray of the light you used to capture

I was so enamored by the beauty you'd manufacture,
But now everything you write is frosted over; lackluster hereafter

So void of life it makes me wonder why we we're still together-

All of our excitement tucked away, summed only in a single stack a paper.
Now only left with memories, and the empty gazes towards former times of warmer weather.

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@formal sage @lilac bronze @viral sorrel @austere swallow

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formal sage Sep 17, 2024, 10:03 AM

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Absolutely amazing work!!

May I ask the backstory behind this magnificent piece?

earnest ginkgo Sep 17, 2024, 10:10 AM

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So I had written another piece "charcoal" about how the overwhelming emotions of the persons partner ate away at them until they were a shell of themselves, so I wanted to do something on the complete opposite end of the spectrum of that. I think I'm going to do one relating to the different elements and how I view them in coordination to relationships, so I've done fire and now ice.
Its been pretty fun for me to think about the destructiveness that having one of these elements being a core feeling can bring

earnest ginkgo Sep 17, 2024, 10:12 AM

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formal sage Absolutely amazing work!! May I ask the backstory behind this magnificent piec...

I'm having so much fun :>

formal sage Sep 17, 2024, 10:13 AM

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earnest ginkgo So I had written another piece "charcoal" about how the overwhelming emotions of...

Absolutely amazing and really well thought out!

Breathtaking truly!

Keep the masterpieces coming!! 💕

earnest ginkgo Sep 17, 2024, 10:15 AM

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Tehehe thank youuu 💗💗💗

austere swallow Sep 17, 2024, 1:36 PM

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omg this is awesome ernisti!! i love this

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amazing poem!

earnest ginkgo Sep 17, 2024, 4:16 PM

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austere swallow omg this is awesome ernisti!! i love this

Thank youuuu NoizeLoves

lilac bronze Sep 17, 2024, 6:16 PM

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earnest ginkgo Your poems are like ice: glacial rhymes and rhetoric trace the page, the ridged ...

The poem effectively uses vivid imagery, such as "glacial rhymes," "blizzard of snowy stories," and "frozen desert," to create a strong sense of coldness and isolation. The poem delves into themes of longing, loss, and the desire for connection, conveying a sense of emotional vulnerability.

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