#I Was, I Am, Without Will

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severe monolith
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I was the best
at one time. No life greater
than mine, in my eyes. No lies
I was something else. Nothing but
highs, and stories to tell. Well,
it seemed that way,
a black and white story, turned
a sudden grey.

I was pleased
with my situation. And ambitious
In creation, life seized by he who
was offered the wealth of all nations.
Good health and prosperity taken,
for granted. The seeds of a future,
planted, the soil and soul didn’t take
as i leave empty handed.

I’m at a standstill, crossroads,
lack of will and all those
times of contentment were deceit,
made me me accept self made
confinement. Except self made from
inaction, and in action i feel discomfort.
There was help laid out, a path, a route,
I can’t help but fade out
with my past and my roots.

I’ll be dead, soon enough
with a huff and a puff. Wrestling,
writing wrongdoings when weary,
delirious, never take things too serious
when its groundhog day tomorrow.
It’s frankly easier to borrow
from him, he wont thank me for it,
matter fact i can hear him,
bashing his way through the brain.
I maintain i’m in the right, and he
in the future, out of sight, is irrelevant.

I’m whats prevalent, the now, the moment.

The next few minutes endowed with the
perpetual task of fending off my greatest opponent.

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@brazen zodiac

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brazen zodiac
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WOW this is awesome lee!!!! i love this!

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the rhymes are awesome

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I’m at a standstill, crossroads,
lack of will and all those
times of contentment were deceit,
made me me accept self made
confinement. Except self made from
inaction, and in action i feel discomfort.
There was help laid out, a path, a route,
I can’t help to fade out with my past and my roots

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i love this stanza!

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awesome poem big buddy🫂

severe monolith
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@young kite
@crimson frigate
@half remnant
@severe ore

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@regal flume

crimson frigate
severe monolith
regal flume
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wow amazing this is really goood

severe monolith
severe ore
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some lovely punch to this

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good

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gritty dictation

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from which spools these wirey taped reflections

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oiling this machine of bitterness with a slight hollowness that all wallowing and self-loathing is encased inside

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your poems often speak to delicate and complex, intimate aspects of manhood

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and the silly hurts feltin the spaces between days

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great read look forward to narration

lost shell
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I like the flow, it is smooth, good work

severe monolith
severe monolith
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I was, I am, without will

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I Was, I Am, Without Will

unborn ermine
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I actually haven't seen this one before