Pink Amaryllis

[celest path]

I just deleted all my feed back by accidentaly pressing this emoji 😂🙏

Its beautiful the way it is i personally would like the 2nd part as We make her dance a game and i let her win.
If she is Happy, I am the same.
Is that what it means do be friends or am i in love am i a clown(either rephrased or not included)" should i shove this feeling down" (together and either rhymed and or changed to something else)

Now that is just my own sprinkle of creativity and you did a great job ❤️@wraith nimbus

[wraith nimbus]

Yeah I wasn’t sure about the clown line but I was running out of words that rhyme with crown

And I was trying to use the same rhyme scheme that I used in #1265680953884409857 because the two are connected

So I need a line there with a word that rhymes with crown

[celest path]

Ofc ofc dont worry about it it doesnt need to be perfectly rhymed anywhere thats just my idea of it and you did a great job

[wraith nimbus]

Thank you!