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vagrant oak
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@edgy plover

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edgy plover
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This was oddly beautiful, especially the last line <33

paper aurora
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Nice poem! I like itt

heady axle
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While others falter, lost in strife,

You sip, untroubled, the wine of life AaruSaysWHAT AaruSaysWHAT ✨ ✨

rich zinc
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I really like this piece ngl it creates a strong contrast between those who drink to escape and 'Harsh', who stands apart. The line "sip, untroubled, the wine of life" ties it all together smoothly, showing that there can be calm and unbothered amidst the chaos. The message is vivid but i wish that you would've added more imagery to further highlight the piece and hit readers harder. It really tells me that some seek for a way out, a way to escape while there are those who chose to accept and adapt which is a really powerful concept. As i said before, i really like this piece!!! Direct and to the point. Outstanding work! ❤️

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