How romance blooms

[prime moat]

Once I was alone,
All I knew was loneliness,
I had such doubts that I was just unlovable,
I thought I’d never find that person,
That was until I met you,
You showed me the light of this world,
You made me want to continue living,
You made me a better person,
As I wake up feeling your arms wrapped around me,
I smile and reminisce on how we met,
It was such a starry night,
The sky was illuminated by the moon,
The moment I laid eyes upon you I felt breathless,
All those doubts I had were flooded away as we talked,
For once I was laughing with someone,
For once I wasn’t alone,
That was about 2 years ago today,
I am so thankful I found you,
And today,
On our 2 year anniversary,
I just hope you say yes.

[bronze bloom]

She better be ripping that ring out of your hand as soon as you kneel down

Poem is beautiful

[prime moat]

Really?

Thankyou

It's my first time writing a happy poem

It's nothing related to me i just wanted to write smth different

[bronze bloom]

It serves the purpose it has to serve, we’ll written too

No need for metaphors or deeper meanings, it’s straightforward as it should be

It’s well done 🙂

[prime moat]

Thankyou Would u mind checking out my other one

[bronze bloom]

I’m leaving rn but drop the link

[prime moat]

Its called the last laugh in the sensitive poem section its quite dark and graphic

[sick dirge]

Wonderful! @prime moat has just pregressed to level 2!

[bronze bloom]

I’ll check it out next time I’m on

[prime moat]

#1280293015247917088

[prime moat]

Awesome thankyou sm

[prime moat]

@frigid idol

[frigid idol]

Hmm, what is the purpose of this poem? Do you plan on using it to propose to a girl? Are you going to get down on one knee after reading this to her?

Or is it just personal like a journal.

[prime moat]

no not at all It was just a concept i wantd to try ive never written a poem abt something happy before like love or anything so

[frigid idol]

It’s a nice poem in that case. I was going to give you this stanza to add to the end if it was for a girl you were going to propose to:

You are the heiress of my heart
The keeper of my soul
Please accept this work of art
And this ring to make me whole.

[prime moat]

that would've been good yes but i like to write thoughts and feelings from other peoples perspective with how i feel sometimes mixed in bc it makes my poems feel like they can relate to the character you know

[frigid idol]

I don’t think you should try to write from other peoples perspective, the whole point of poetry is to convey what’s on your mind. Poetry is the language our souls would speak if they could talk, so what is your souls language?

[prime moat]

I understand that but I feel the only way i can write is through creating a character going through hardship or experiencing things such as love in this instance it makes me feel like im one with that character you know