#The Blossom Of The Wilt - Lumenoir(Fire)

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It's a new dawn,
That slowly dries up the damp lawn.
Like rainbow sprinkles that glitter up the sky
After the gloomy clouds.
Seeping through the soil—
A single drop, broken into two;
Drops of soul, perhaps.

A bit shy at first, both of them.
Fighting, finding some space for their own growth.
A bit too much water on her side,
A ray of light too bright on his;
Slowly, but surely, they Learned to share.

A hint of ecstasy in his fragrance
That did steal the bee from her.
He swallowed two of his own thorns for her,
The third would only be a new friend.

Some oil, that she spilled every now and then.
"Perhaps he will slip and fall for me."

His second petal bloomed,
The third of her's;
And blossomed, the first for both,
A new love.

The sun rose high.
In the shadows,
Their roots intertwined.
Fates crossed,
Running deep.

Flying past, the birds would sing.
They would dance, along with the wind.

From his to hers,
The sun went over.
It was the nature of her creed,
She faced away.
All the sweetness was a lie.
Roots intertwined,
Or strangled to death?
She was a sunflower,
And he, a Rose.

As dusk shades his life grey,
And the orange sunset hues,
That set his heart ablaze.

It's a new dawn.
Rain falls again, ever so cold.
The morning dew,
Endlessly falling off the petals.
A silent whisper echoes in the rose,
"At least, I didn't cry alone."

The rose wilts,
Stabbed to the death by his own thorns.
Red again, with his own blood.

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@past matrix

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@visual yoke

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GUYS I FINALLY WROTE SOMETHING

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@half ferry

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@brisk wing

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@sleek stratus

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@maiden echo

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@hazy vault

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@rancid warren

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@woeful nymph YAYY

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This is a beautiful and poignant poem. It tells a story of two flowers, a sunflower and a rose, that grow together and fall in love. Despite their differences, they find a way to connect and support each other.
The poem explores themes of love, loss, and the complexities of relationships. The sunflower's selfishness and the rose's devotion create a powerful contrast that ultimately leads to tragedy.

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The ending is particularly heartbreaking, as the rose sacrifices itself for the sunflower, only to be betrayed in the end. It's a reminder that even the most selfless love can be met with cruelty.

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This poem is a reminder that love can be both beautiful and painful, and that sometimes, even the most heartfelt sacrifices may not be enough.

past matrix
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Amazing poem fire, I really love this one , might be one of my favourites

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Its really amazing

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The Blossom Of The Wilt.

hazy vault
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WELL WRITTEN, I need to save this and read this again and again

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Thank youu:))

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You flatter me too much

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Thanks a lot vindi!!

hazy vault
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Keep writing

woeful nymph
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Damn at least, I didn't cry alone is one killer lineNoizeLoves

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@undone cedar ik I'm very late in pinging you but yes

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@keen shore