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@swift stag
@floral shale
@light cargo
@near python
@kind jolt
@brave mural
@grizzled osprey
@icy stump
@tribal jetty
@cinder gyro
@jade snow
@trail rain
@robust flint
@faint flicker
@cinder kestrel
@fading peak
@rugged shuttle
@balmy wigeon
@idle socket
@alpine spear
@rugged shuttle
@echo sky
@sturdy fable
@tranquil basalt
@tepid falcon
@barren sinew
@shy girder
@tardy finch
the line breaks in here just feel so well-placed ngl, nice poem :3
This is really good! I like the way you wrote this poem. Overall, a very good and well written poem! 😁
Loved it truly.
“It was never about possessing beauty but admiring it” went really hard, I also really like the wording you use and spacing
Thank you so much, I’m glad you liked it 😊
@warped heath
amazing poem bard!! been a while since I read your works, it was pretty refreshing :D
I loved this one truly, I love the idea
It sails really smooth once you reach "about making it mine", I would start with seeing a flower and not having it. Like a thing is not truly free when one lay claims to it. Leave it wild. Its a really good poem.
i saw it every day,
& its vibrant petals catching the sun,
its scent flirting with the air, ✨ 👌
i love the idea of letting the flower be “rooted, alive,” waving freely, almost like you're giving it space to exist on its own terms. its such a beautiful metaphor for how we can approach life and relationships—letting people be themselves, appreciating their beauty without trying to possess or change them. the lines about “quiet rebellion” and “freedom” really stood out to me. they make the poem feel like a soft, but powerful statement about valuing honesty and simplicity over convention.
great job!!!