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robust idol
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@heady jay

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tardy finch
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the line breaks in here just feel so well-placed ngl, nice poem :3

grizzled osprey
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This is really good! I like the way you wrote this poem. Overall, a very good and well written poem! 😁

tepid falcon
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Loved it truly.

sleek pendant
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“It was never about possessing beauty but admiring it” went really hard, I also really like the wording you use and spacing

robust idol
robust idol
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echo sky
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amazing poem bard!! been a while since I read your works, it was pretty refreshing :D

brave mural
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I loved this one truly, I love the idea

finite sparrow
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It sails really smooth once you reach "about making it mine", I would start with seeing a flower and not having it. Like a thing is not truly free when one lay claims to it. Leave it wild. Its a really good poem.

tranquil basalt
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i saw it every day,

& its vibrant petals catching the sun,

its scent flirting with the air, ✨ 👌

swift stag
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i love the idea of letting the flower be “rooted, alive,” waving freely, almost like you're giving it space to exist on its own terms. its such a beautiful metaphor for how we can approach life and relationships—letting people be themselves, appreciating their beauty without trying to possess or change them. the lines about “quiet rebellion” and “freedom” really stood out to me. they make the poem feel like a soft, but powerful statement about valuing honesty and simplicity over convention.

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great job!!!