The Grim Reaper

[fathom dust]

@ornate cedar

This one I've made it some months ago I have an notebook there I write all my poetry pieces and refine them by using a dictionary and learning different styles

[ornate cedar]

Hmm

Me and you seem to have similar taste

I'll tag you for some of my poems

[fathom dust]

I wanna show the way I write this poem

[ornate cedar]

Okay-

[fathom dust]

If you can understand my writing I don't wanna show real life my notebook so I'll ask here for improvement ideas for my writing and style

I also like to write beside every poem I write and the hour I write that poem to remember me of the old good times

Makes me appreciate things more and how some pages can hold the past

[ornate cedar]

Hmm true

[fathom dust]

Ones of my goals it's to finish this notebook by the end of the year but I don't know If it's posibile I spend to much time making poetry and refining them and writing it's very energy draining

[ornate cedar]

For the |Life asked, "why do tears reside?" You could put "where are tears found?" And for the "Humans chase thrills, defy the fall, yet miss life's meaning risking all." You could put "With a humans undying grace of defying the fall of missing life's meaning, why do they risk it all.? I'ma stop there because that doesn't seem to be a good example

[fathom dust]

It's okay I love the way you put the where are tears found it gives more imagination to the reader like what made thoose tears drop , I like the way you put everything when imma do new pieces imma tag you for help

[loud root]

Wonderful! @fathom dust has just pregressed to level 1!

[ornate cedar]

Okay ^^ I'm always open to help

[fathom dust]

Do you have a piece that you would like ideas on it or maybe even a little to refine

[ornate cedar]

I have two

[fathom dust]

With a little music and concentrating I can get in my own writing style and help

[fathom dust]

Ping me

[ornate cedar]

Okay

Ima refine your poem maybe give it a whole new twist its your choice whether to take it or not

[fathom dust]

I would really appreciate

[ornate cedar]

On a silent moonlight night,
The Reaper heavily sighed,
Such a deep sound
So achingly beautiful was his question:
"Where are tears found?"
"Why do humans weep?"

Didn't mean to send

I'm not done 💀

[fathom dust]

I think night wasn't necessary to be added because moonlight showed the fact that's already night like

The Grim Reaper
Silently cry watching the heavy sky
The moonlight that showed cries reside
The loved one camed beside
Asked why those lovely cries reside ?"

I gave only an exampme