#Eyes White as a Ghost

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eternal iron
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Two years ago I met a lady, who shall remain unknown,
We talked a lot and I asked her for her cell number,
Our 1st date went great, and I bought her a bouquet of flowers,
The 2nd date went fantastic, we watched the avengers endgame,
Suddenly out of the blue she ghosted me, didn't even say bye,
She left me, something died inside me when I saw her Instagram pic with her and a guy—
A guy that she met online then I realized, real eyes realize real lies,
I let out a sigh, I'm bothered by this not gonna lie, but all of my feelings for her died,
Relationship died, love separated, divide, couldn't decide,
Don't know why, I wasted my time, wasted my heart, wasted all hi's—
All hi's but no goodbyes spoken, she was my first girlfriend, now not even a friend,
Everything worsened and she—out-of-the-blue—suddenly DM'ed me again,
But there is no relation, just asking me how I've been, of course I said I've been fine,
I was hoping she wouldn't talk to me again but I was forced to respond, lesson learned; Never love a fake one, trust your intuitions. In a matter you shall see, for what i am—
And what could've been us, a complex mind, deserves of any kind, propelled by emotions, I'm used to moving in slow motion in relation.
I felt you fall from heaven up high, but you were sent by flies, I only sighed when you left me out of sight, I might've cried last time, so I gotta ask myself, Why did I feel love towards our relationship that was turned into nothing—nothing but pain, happiness down the drain, only to be recovered by true love; the memories gone within a moment.

Love full of passion, yet full of lies,
Overflowing lies with very little love,
Visage of a shattered heart that's wise,
Eyes white as a ghost, yet black as darkness.

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golden star
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You write quite a lot of poems

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I really like the poem

eternal iron
edgy temple
worn panther
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Your poem powerfully captures the emotional rollercoaster of love, betrayal, and self-discovery. The mix of raw emotions and vivid imagery makes it relatable and deeply human.

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Nice

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👍

eternal iron
eternal iron
dire breach
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RAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA loved this one, the rhymes were so much better than the other ones I've seen you write! the last few vereses of your second stanza was actually so well written, and I'm really impressed! Keep up the good work!

eternal iron
modest abyss