#Tales by the moon ~kenzy

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thorny isle
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The moon shone brightly in dark skies
A companion to my nightly walks
The light talks to me in whispers
"Your weary soul needs a night of rest
Its best to doze in the moonlight's glow
The water flows by, a delightful sight
Rest in my brilliant veils as you listen to golden tales
Before the serenity dies, before the sunrise."

Heart fluttered hearing the words uttered
Growing ever more weary as eyes grew teary
A crest of honor marked beneath tired eyes
Long nights in the moon's embrace
Attest to my hard work with grace,
Surely a night of rest is well deserved...
Reserved for a rest amidst the mist.

Tales of gold , told to guide the way–
In the moonlit lands of ages lost
Of Bold heroes who swayed and in dust stayed
Their Flame of honor turned cold
Their names forgotten in tales told

*"Test the waters, best to keep it warm,
Reach your arms for the sea, then..
See what harm lies in hidden seabeds;
Forbidden treasures, ridden with sins

Tens of thousands of pearls in water
Swirl in harmony as the sea whirls,
I wonder...did you falter..?
Greed...Did it falter your resolve?

treasures are fleeting, reeking of sin
Washed by the waves until they dissolve,
Seeking them is pointless—you say it's harmless?
Surely you jest, did you forget the rest?
Test the waters, best to keep it warm
Harm lies hidden in forbidden seas,
Heed the warning lest you end up rotten."*

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Honestly this probably needed more editing but idk how to fix it, first poem posted after writer's block

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@lone wyvern
@waxen maple
@alpine scaffold

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@harsh wasp

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@nova garden

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@lament tendon

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@craggy solstice
@clever crag

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@swift fiber
@mellow birch
@past blaze

swift fiber
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Amazing piece! You more than earn the title "perfect"

thorny isle
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@leaden veldt

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Bro idk who to ping-

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@flat sundial

harsh wasp
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great job well written piece

thorny isle
mellow birch
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that is absolutely magnificent you made me wanna write again fr, I haven't read a poem in a long time, and this is just absolutely wonderous, kenzy poems are always on spot ! And this one was more than on spot fr, amazing 👏 ❤️💯👌

leaden veldt
thorny isle
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leaden veldt
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mellow birch
thorny isle
lament tendon
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A crest of honor marked beneath tired eyes

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highlight

thorny isle
lament tendon
thorny isle
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Not sure tbh but uh it's 3am and my brain is lagging-

ionic yewBOT
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*Not sure tbh

but uh it's 3am and

my brain is lagging-*

- The perfect Ms. insomnia (kenzy)
thorny isle
lament tendon
# thorny isle I mean... I think that means you like that line?

Highlight: a summary of the most significant or interesting parts of something (such as a completed sporting event) presented typically on a television broadcast. usually plural. watched highlights of the night's games. 2. : a spot or area that is lighter than surrounding spots or areas:

thorny isle
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I am happy for that, thank you<33

thorny isle
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@fathom vigil

fathom vigil
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And didn't remember me once

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Wow

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Okay

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Im offended

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||just kidding||

flat sundial
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Oh

thorny isle
flat sundial
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You tagged me for the first time right ?

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👀

fathom vigil
thorny isle
flat sundial
thorny isle
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If you don't want me toI can like not ping you next time

thorny isle
thorny isle
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flat sundial
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🤔

thorny isle
steel boneBOT
thorny isle
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That's why I kept it as golden tales

flat sundial
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Ah got it

thorny isle
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Thank you though

flat sundial
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Overall, I enjoyed reading it. You did a good job 👍

thorny isle
nova garden
fathom vigil
flat sundial
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@nova garden 👀

thorny isle
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thorny isle
nova garden
flat sundial
nova garden
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You brought it up, so I'll check one out now

sick tundra
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I think you did an absolutely amazing job. I was so in awe as I read it

shy linden
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ooo i really like “before the serenity dies, before the sunrise” thats a+ assonance right there

sick tundra
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Oh it is a very awesome metaphor and I'm here for it

thorny isle
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sick tundra
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spiral fiber
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You wrote deep words that make person Keep think about beauty of your words you have good talents

Try to write about One topic
Example :if you talk about son and Suddenly talk about trees

If write about one topic that will make who read your Poems He feels suspense with what he read, but you'r poems relly good and make person want read more, what i said will make your Poems more beautiful And more exciting, With the nest of improvement you can be a great poet one day, you have amazing talent one day I'll be like you, I'll try to be like you, Keep going and I'll support you, good luck 🌹🌹🌹🌹

thorny isle
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I will try, thank you so much

spiral fiber
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thorny isle
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@spiral fiber another onee

thorny isle
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@raw fossil

noble lintel
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Wow

thorny isle
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Tales by the moon ~kenzy

thorny isle
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@low rock

weak glen
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OOOOOHHH

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Im saving this for later

thorny isle
weak glen
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Okie dokie, second read for me.

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The personification of the moon and the speaker makes it so dreamlike, as if you were being tempted by this celestial being into giving in to a dark void

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The dark waters in the night and everything feels so ethereal and alive

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And the language is just mwah altogether

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I honestly can't tell if the moon is benevolent or if he tries to lure the speaker into the waters

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After all, there is no conclusion, it is left in ambiguity

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But overall just such a beautiful nature theme and cozy vibe!

ionic yewBOT
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*But overall just

such a beautiful nature

theme and cozy vibe!*

- pixbo_06
thorny isle
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I mostly left that up for interpretation, the moon is mostly a narrator to deliver a warning for me

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The warning being about greed and all

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That's the most obvious but I honestly personally think that the moon is benevolent though again it is up to interpretation

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I usually just write and never focus too much on a specific meaning, people can interpret it the way they like

thorny isle
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@versed hawk

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This is the poem

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Pretty old

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But meh

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The painting attached is the one that Inspired the poem

versed hawk
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I loved the narrative in this. How it twists and turns. It makes you think one way, than other. It has a way of questioning oneself. It fits well with the painting, as they don't know where and which path they're headed. Beautiful 💜

thorny isle
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@pale scaffold

thorny isle
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@strong needle
This is an old poem but might be one of my best poems

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Second best maybe?

strong needle
thorny isle
thorny isle
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@fresh thorn

fresh thorn
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I’ll soon read

thorny isle
fresh thorn