Orchestra

[bright cedar]

Exhaustion is music,
Slow dancing melodies,
That don't let you stop until the last note rings out,
A solemn conclusion to a frivolous scene,
And a euphonious choir,
Singing until their throats break down,
Just so the audience may feel some tranquility.

[fallen nimbus]

~~a euphonious choir should be an ~~
This is lovely and well written, you have a great vocabulary, it's a very nice short piece

[bright cedar]

AH, will fix that, thank you very much !

[river urchin]

“a” is correct. You wouldn’t use “an” in this instance, even though “euphonious” starts with a vowel. Violet_Rosey is right though, this is wonderful and very well written. You use your knowledge of words to its best use.

[bright cedar]

oop gots to change it back, thank you bunches !