How to carpe diem?

[woven solar]

@desert thorn @bleak notch @lunar scarab @proper crest @plucky prawn

first time writing something other than a sonnet, a limerick. not sure how i feel about it though

[bleak notch]

@bleak notch readz

[woven solar]

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[viral smelt]

Seems very "dead poets society" inspired

Great work all the same

[woven solar]

Yes I guess it kinda is! Thank you lots🙏

[bleak notch]

You can't imagine how satisfying it is to see you able to explore a new structure, which can fundamentally serve as an alternative to your sonnets - which are very good, I don't imply otherwise.

I like how this limerick corroborates a little with the image that Kierkegaard brings to mind or with Sartre's existentialism, although I don't think it was intentional on your part - correct me if I'm wrong.

There's a certain trance in how it was composed and it's already a very good gateway for you to consolidate the nuances of your repertoire that will emerge. I'm patiently waiting for that.

[woven solar]

Thank you!! I‘m gonna try a few more shorter poems now, varying my sonnets a little bit!! Was unsure with this one but thank u so much!! ❤️

[plucky prawn]

Nice mention of Croatian with "Carpe diem". Short and simplistic poem with a nice catch phrase in the end traditionally following the Limerick style. Well done!

[viral smelt]

Latin.... ?

[woven solar]

As the person before me said, you probably mean Latin, not Croatian!(: Thank u lots!