Writing II

[indigo portal]

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Anyway, this is a continuation of my yesterday one #1272233102017826826

[compact wyvern]

The image of a candle burning with desire is particularly striking. It shows the passion and dedication that goes into writing.

The lines about seizing the day and not wasting time reflect the urgency and determination of a writer who's in the zone.

[indigo portal]

Exactly! Thank u so much (:

[real thicket]

Oh wowww, i lovee really gives me a sense of what goes through our minds when we are determined to write haha

[indigo portal]

Exactly what I wanted to convey! Thank youu ❤️

[real thicket]

It was as if I had been transported to a romantic universe, based on the anguish of its last stanza, where the urgency is taken up by the desire to become a writer/poet.

Perfectly condenses the author's fullness while contemplating the formation of what is to come, where, in the absence of a conclusion, only art remains as a muse.

It also reflects the sense of belonging that accompanies us in the progress of intensifying our recognition of the art we build. It resonates with most of us on this server.

[indigo portal]

Thank you so much!

[indigo portal]

@twin osprey

[digital python]

@indigo portal I am so sorry for not reading this I completely forgot about it!

Yuuuuuup another form of looking at writing. Even if I don't have that much experience in creative writing, I still somehow relate to this😂

Incase you have this idea of making a part 3, an idea for the part where you use a lot of imperative language could be "Don't be so hard on yourself." Personally, that's the No.1 phrase that people keep telling me.

You could add it in as you telling yourself that, only to later continue it with "But then I won't reach my goal." Or something like that. I feel like people will really catch that

[indigo portal]

Hey no worries at all! Thank u for always making time to read my poems, it means a lot to me (: Thats such a fantastic idea, I will definitely consider doing that if I decide on making part 3 ❤️

[digital python]

Awesome! I'm eager to see more from your work

[pliant shard]

I’m loving some of your word choices in this one; “In moody hours my light flicks on/Like a candle ignited with desire;”, “The words overflow, as it consumes me whole.”. Compelling, interesting, creative & attractive to the ear.

It’s carrying some of the same energy and mood as the prequel. I feel it’s building on the feeling expressed at the end of Writing I — of being unwilling or incapable to stop writing.
I’ve definitely detected themes of perfectionism, determination to succeed, and frustration in this poem. Sums up an average writing experience (for me at least!!)

Imo, an insightful look into the mind of an artist who is subjected to their creativity. Well done 🫶🫶

[indigo portal]

Thank u so much !! ❤️❤️

[twin osprey]

Ok this is a good poem too, i like some of the lines in this but the very last line, i think u could reword that a bit differently idk, The words overflow, as it consumes me whole. I think instead of whole, i think u can say soul

or body

[indigo portal]

Okay thank you so much!

[magic bear]

@indigo portal where's the poem