#snow, my love

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vivid hedge
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@upbeat charm @toxic lichen @toxic lichen

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@cinder axle @gloomy prairie @boreal marlin

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@weak mirage @atomic goblet @naive void

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been writing a lot about nature lately (:

toxic lichen
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I captured a sense of inner discernment, the reflection of nature as a display of one's own spirit - in a way that Philosophical Poetry manages to format with excellence - and well organized so that it is more overwhelming.

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It may be my fondness for transcendentalism and naturalism, but what you've shown here leads me to consider it one of your best poems, at least of those I've had the chance to check out. Keep it up, it's very good.

vivid hedge
vivid hedge
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vivid hedge
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@shadow igloo this, for example, is written in the same structure

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@sharp saffron

sharp saffron
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This is refreshing - a poem about snow certainly brings some joy and endearment to the heart <3
The structure seems to compliment the enjambment you use and it flows seamlessly!
Adore the imagery you use, as well!

Having a reason to enter the opera of outdoor
Amazing stuff ✨

shadow igloo
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Ooohh

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Positive poem

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Niceeee

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I liked it

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Your imagery is nice