#snow, my love
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@cinder axle @gloomy prairie @boreal marlin
@weak mirage @atomic goblet @naive void
been writing a lot about nature lately (:
Now, this poem is more concise than "Ode to the fog" because of the reasons I gave you in that chat: he rest of the verses are more suited to this ontological and emotional progression that you, as the author, are proposing.
I captured a sense of inner discernment, the reflection of nature as a display of one's own spirit - in a way that Philosophical Poetry manages to format with excellence - and well organized so that it is more overwhelming.
It may be my fondness for transcendentalism and naturalism, but what you've shown here leads me to consider it one of your best poems, at least of those I've had the chance to check out. Keep it up, it's very good.
Wow, thank you so so much! Really appreciate it. I wrote this at 12am unable to keep my eyes open, actually😂 Perhaps the best fruits of life come when you least expect it. Thanks!
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This is refreshing - a poem about snow certainly brings some joy and endearment to the heart <3
The structure seems to compliment the enjambment you use and it flows seamlessly!
Adore the imagery you use, as well!
Having a reason to enter the opera of outdoor
Amazing stuff ✨
thank u so much (: