Deceptive Truth

[next marsh]

Only if you would have read my mind, would you have known how good I am at lying.

My first Monostitch.

@tacit glacier

@abstract pivot

@ember wing

@grand rose

@dapper remnant

@glossy mauve

@prisma island

@fathom blaze

@mellow briar

@radiant musk

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@candid raptor

@pearl sandal

@grizzled scarab

[tacit glacier]

Beautiful one. Almost like a dialog

[radiant musk]

Damn bro.
Yeah the title fits this text like a glove. Dark twist for whoever this poem goes to.
Nice work

[dapper remnant]

i agree with feedback above, the twist is very cool!

[next marsh]

Thanks a lot

[prisma island]

the only thing im scared of is somebody reading my mind

[next marsh]

Mostly everyone is afraid of that.

[next marsh]

@void field

[sturdy arch]

Nice:)

[next marsh]

@craggy jungle

[craggy jungle]

😳

[next marsh]

??

[craggy jungle]

That’s good

And honest ?

👀

[craggy jungle]

If you’d read my mind,

You’d see the lies I weave well—

Truths tangled in schemes.

[long orchid]

*If you’d read my mind,

You’d see the lies I weave well—

Truths tangled in schemes.*

- The Ethereal Bard

[shrewd island]

I think despite how short it is, it tells us a story that could’ve gone on for years or even months, and it allows the readers imagination to wander and fill in blank spaces.

[next marsh]

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment 😊

@slender burrow

@tawny pilot

[tawny pilot]

Only if you could feel my heartbeat, would you have known how good you look when crying.

haha. these are fun!

nice one @next marsh , do more of these ✨

[void field]

Only when hanging by a thread
Do I worry about my head.

You're right these are fun

[next marsh]

Sure

[void field]

awesome work btw

[next marsh]

@lost ruin

[next marsh]

@barren radish

@worldly flame

[worldly flame]

This is powerful! It really captures the complexity of emotions and the hidden layers we often keep to ourselves. The line about being good at lying is so striking—there’s so much depth in such few words.

[next marsh]

Thanks a lot

[next marsh]

@grand rose

@ember kestrel

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@cold hearth

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@dry wadi

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@stoic flower