#Through My Eternal Persienne (Jane)
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@warm crystal
@weary haven
@median parrot
@untold lion
@spare cave
@deep violet
@tranquil chasm
@jovial palm
@slim quiver
@wary forge
@dusky burrow
@sage ivy
@keen pumice
@robust wave
@median parrot
@waxen pivot
@tawny mica
@runic flume
@amber burrow
@drifting zodiac
@steep matrix
@meager lark
@tacit spruce
@rose knot
@median parrot
@fickle leaf
@wraith owl
@soft musk
@grave wasp
I would have given you 105 if that gal in the photo were you…..😌
😭if its 105/300 its a failing marks
AWWWWWWWWW HERE'S A CHOCOLATE 🍫
@median parrot
@surreal cedar
@normal elm
@gentle briar
@nocturne burrow
@tough ocean
*Give me a while
for an indepth review, but
it seems very good*
@low zodiac
"Pray it pierces my heart or poisons my head." I love this line so much! Very good poem. I love your writing style so much ❤️
The poem is filled with powerful imagery and metaphors that convey a deep sense of emotional pain and longing. The poem effectively uses metaphors ("life's treason," "chariots of mine paraded in grief," "saccharine scar") and similes ("Like an opulence of love") to paint vivid imagery.
Omg I love this so much Jane! This is amazing, the vocabulary is awesome and your style is amazing, i am in love
♡♡Big thanks
Awwww thanks ♡♡
This is really good!
amazing!! as always!! I also like the use of latin here hahha