#Fall In Love With Oneself (Rico and Vindi Collab)

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***I feel like
I'm floating in space.
A vacuum,
the void,
the simple bright stellar darkness.
The universe sings to me,
an orchestra of stars.
They tell me to take a step,
because floating doesn't work forever.

I feel my life
Pulling and tugging
On my best achievements
To remind me
Of my greatest victories
When I slide from
This world I want people
To remember my legacy
I shall triumph and soar
Over the clouds at twenty-three

With every memory, a leap.
Wings beat in sync with freedom.
Lifting off the ground,
clearing the air of evil,
and shouting across the seas
so that the waves carry hope,
a breath of grace,
and crash onto the sands,
where they will intertwine
until they dry up fulfilled dreams.

The storm will be here
It is inevitable
But my future is clear
Anything is possible
I have my leaf clover beside me
And my heart
That pours out pure gold
And beauty
My hopefulness is many
My dreams remain steady

I love every little piece of me,
every curve.
I admire my progress,
my ways and mannerisms.
I live my persevering spirit,
I adore my silly smiles.
I dream while sleeping and value that,
I honor my living history,
I appreciate my achievements
and applaud my character.
I think it’s never too late to fall in love with oneself. ***

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@muted juniper

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@wary patrol

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@robust dock

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@gray tree

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@gray narwhal

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@faint plume

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@wanton apex

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@forest stag

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@wary patrol

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@astral chasm

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@sudden yew

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@hardy apex

muted juniper
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@mint grotto

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muted juniper
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Thank you for yhis chance vindi!

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🔥🔥🔥

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@worthy cipher

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@brittle dock

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@languid swan

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@dense gate

muted juniper
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@nocturne wedge

robust dock
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Omg I love that , an amazing collab, both of you guys slayed this!
I really loved this one!

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@scarlet ravine

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@tawdry turtle

robust dock
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I enjoyed reading this!

steady breach
muted juniper
robust dock
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@hardy apex

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@spare tree

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@serene zephyr

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@tawdry turtle

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@radiant vapor

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@indigo whale

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@raw cipher

gray narwhal
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*drags you

wanton apex
steady breach
wanton apex
# steady breach what seems odd ?

For starters the line
** So that the waves carry to everyone.**
Umm it lacks the object for the verb carry …I know you added a hope afterwards but I think it belongs in the line 😅

steady breach
wanton apex
languid swan
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A collab I have been dying to see😩

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I’am too stunned to speak atm

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Loved this so much

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nocturne wedge
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This poem was INCREDIBLE, the way you brought together the vastness of the universe with personal nuances is admirably beautiful, the metaphors create a connection both with space and with one's own emotions. The beginning with the ''universe singing an orchestra of stars'' and its suggestion to take a step instead of floating brings a special depth, as if it were the beginning of a journey of self-discovery and acceptance, instead of staying in the same place and aimlessly, as if the universe were giving a little push, which we see actually happens throughout the poem, with the memories of the greatest victories reflecting on wanting to leave a legacy for the world, (an ambition that many share) the will to make a difference, and these memories compared to a synchronous flight with freedom bring an air that our experiences serve as fuel for our growth, so that we seek new sensations and future experiences, always with hope and optimism even with the inevitable ''storms'' that appear on the way, as in the penultimate stanza, with the image of the clover leaf and the heart pouring gold and beauty keeping the dreams unshakable. But the part I loved the most was undoubtedly the last stanza, which deserves to be highlighted:

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I love every little piece of me,
every curve.
I admire my progress,
my ways and mannerisms.
I live my persevering spirit,
I adore my silly smiles.
I dream while sleeping and value that,
I honor my living history,
I appreciate my achievements
and applaud my character.
I think it's never too late to fall in love with oneself.
The celebration of self-love and self-acceptance, the admiration of every little piece, every curve, the silly smile, the appreciation of achievements and the way you live, culminating in the idea that it's never too late to fall in love with yourself, is of a beauty and truth that impacts, as if it were a message of encouragement and confidence, showing that we must be our greatest admiration and inspiration.
you both knocked it out of the park, this poem was wonderful !!!SaberSaysPretty SaberSaysPretty

languid swan
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RICO AND VINDI COLLABB

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I am just sure its going to be amazing

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oh dear this is awesome!!