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[blissful galleon]

so sorry if i havent been giving feedback to your poems, i was working all week lol i'll look into them tonight!

@hollow crow @twin olive @inland orbit

@vague flower @woeful gyro @hasty egret

@noble rain @teal dragon @paper leaf

[torn geode]

This is really nice, I love how easy it reads. Also the last line about untying a wet knot really connects well to your fourth line that talks about rain—very satisfying.

Just a thought / question about the topic: do you put actually have these doubts about marriage? It’s ok if the question is too personal, I was just wondering.

[blissful galleon]

hey thank u so much for the feedback! As of my opinion, yes, obviously I've put it to the extreme in my poem to convey the right message, but well I am definitely a bit hesitant when it comes to the thought of marriage. for example the thought of giving up your last name is just horrifying. I know one can still keep theirs, but oftentimes it becomes an issue in the relationship (I speak from experience, lol). also the thought of binding with only 1 person forever?! honestly, i have not met anyone i could imagine that with so far, hence my position on the topic. perhaps itll change when i meet the right person. but as of now, i would not get married for a fortune. (:

[torn geode]

Yeah, I think it’s good that you recognize what it is you do and don’t want. I know for sure that I’m going to be very careful about who I decide to invest in (idk why I made it sound like a business transaction but ykwim).

[blissful galleon]

LMAOOO yes exactly! like if i DO eventually get married, he's gotta be 101% what I want. I won't settle for less.

[blissful galleon]

<@&1145760802666717234> pls

[hasty egret]

omg i love this, the "wet knot" line hits hard ❤️

really makes you question big choices in life

[blissful galleon]

thanks love!!

[strong topaz]

Wonderful! @blissful galleon has just pregressed to level 7!

[twin olive]

The fact that you manage to resonate, with conspicuous helplessness, with the virtues of loving someone and having to deal considerably with the nuances that a passion can create is an indication of your talent.

As far as I can see, this is one of the principles by which you apparently consolidate this longing for conciliation, as well as your search for the one who can satisfy you romantically - if I'm wrong, please, correct me.

To be able to touch on this idea of establishing a bond, aware that it can be dismantled, and turn this into poetry, is quite an effort. But I see that you manage to do it naturally. A talent, a gift, whatever. That's excellent.

[blissful galleon]

Yes exactly! You never fail to decipher my poetry❤️