Empty, A Kid

[hazy lintel]

A Haiku on the foundational elements of depression where Empty is a kid from classroom.

[floral falcon]

fascinated by the use of "Mr" here, is it to imply that this is often inflicted by a man or is it a coincidence you chose Mr?

[hazy lintel]

My intention to use Mr. was to address a kind of authority here. Like calling a kid from your class for a teacher.

[floral falcon]

that's fair! less about gender and more about status, makes total sense! it's a very nice poem ❤️

[hazy lintel]

Yeahh, thanks! I'm glad you liked it <33

[frigid apex]

Amazing, and great job!! 🙂

[hazy lintel]

Thank you Sir 🙂

[drifting fulcrum]

Great job puff!I like this one a lot

[hazy lintel]

Thanks my dear <33

[hazy lintel]

@whole onyx
@dawn field
@late canopy
@hazy lintel

@lapis ravine
@static rapids
@sick obsidian

@brittle sluice

@woeful grail

[hazy lintel]

@dusty jay @urban steeple

[dawn field]

This is so creative!

[hazy lintel]

Nice Work

[urban steeple]

Ooo what does "dents" mean, Puff? I wanna try to understand this.