#Loneliness is in the Details

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mighty loom
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pale wagon
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I need 2 min silence

mighty loom
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pale wagon
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Have I found loneliness?
Among these dots that do not look scattered so?
What do I explain of the stories weaved
Between the spaces of what seems to me—
An eulogy so pure,
For even white spaces has tales to tell,
I never had, or so I would know.

mighty loom
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Damn I inspired Jane 😱

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mighty loom
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alpine kayak
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I felt this one, I really like it!! Its great!

mighty loom
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hasty kraken
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Ooo this one hit. Short, yet it was beautiful! I like it!

storm panther
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I love how short and refreshing your poems are

late atlasBOT
storm panther
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And they are filled in emotion

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I like it sm

winter kernel
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Really clever concept you went with here

hearty marten
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I love how the presentation is a part of the poem , quite out of the box <<3

prisma bloom
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i like it!!<3

mighty loom
tulip ibex
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wow this poem reflects on the question of what loneliness truly is

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the use of symbols such as unlit candles on a solitary bday cake, silent celebrations, and echo of cheers without joy all speak to the feeling of emptiness and isolation that often comes with being lonely

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and the poem explores the idea that loneliness can be found in the spaces between connection and celebration

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the tone is kinda self analysing? and a bit melancholic, as u suggests that loneliness can often go unnoticed in unexpected places

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i really like this poem

mighty loom