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#Live
cerulean ibex
Now that I read this again I'm gonna end up changing the end
Because I don't like the end
^ edited version
cerulean ibex
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stark spear
Want me to comment on the 1st or 2nd version
cerulean ibex
Want me to comment on the 1st or 2nd version
The 2nd one
stark spear
The 2nd one
Alr, yes ma'am
cerulean ibex
Alr, yes ma'am
stark spear
I love it. I love how u made it address the reader and the style you used
cerulean ibex
I love it. I love how u made it address the reader and the style you used
Awe thank youu
stark spear
Not only that, but i feel like i can relate to it in a sense, its beautiful and well written
cerulean ibex
Thank youu 
stark spear
If u dont mind telling, what was your inspiration here?
cerulean ibex
This poet named Fanta ratty has a video on ig with a 3 stanza/line poem and it's beautiful ima gonna find it
Instagram
That was my inspiration literally just what she said was enough for me
cerulean ibex
Thats wonderful
Yeah
cerulean ibex
Say, do u ever write poems about love?
No I want to start soon everybody tells me I should
But I wanna experience it so im able to write it well
stark spear
I get that
Thats why i dont write love poems anymore
When i write love poems i capture the feelings of the love i felt and when i reread it it feel those feeling again, so i dont wanna write an empty love poem
cerulean ibex
Agreed because I feel like if you experience love you're able to write about it better and understand it better
Without writing based off of observation
stark spear
Mhm. If u want i can ping u where i sent my love poems
cerulean ibex
Sure I'll probably read them tomorrow because I'm dozing rn😭
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