The Ancient Gazette (Jane)

[timber bay]

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@sly grove

@lavish elbow

@rocky rock

@patent garnet

@novel chasm

@molten wadi

@sinful trellis

@worldly field

@midnight stirrup

@lavish elbow

@vale glacier

@naive rapids

@near nebula

@gilded zodiac

@novel chasm

@lavish elbow

@low warren

@hearty saddle

@frank wraith

@runic ice

@bitter idol

@gusty talon

@cloud ingot

@upper drift

@ashen isle

[upper drift]

It's filled with rich imagery and complex emotions. It feels like a journey through a dark, passionate world. As a poet, I indeed find this very relatable. here's a strong sense of giving up something precious, perhaps a part of oneself, for a greater purpose. The use of alliteration and internal rhyme adds to the musicality of the poem.

[timber bay]

@vestal harbor

@hollow jasper

@valid badger

@wanton estuary

@trail sinew

[trail sinew]

study

[timber bay]

GIVE ME A FEEDBACK WTH- 😭

[trail sinew]

nope. /sar

[timber bay]

(Mental note: no tagging Shar next)

[sly grove]

Oooh..artistry, legacy & sacrifice 🌹🌹🌹

Imma write a note to you

[trail sinew]

no one will give you a feedback like me tho remember that. (it is somewhat true.)

[timber bay]

You're not even writing me a feedback, you're just always telling me to study 😔

[trail sinew]

yes, study

[timber bay]

First feedback

[trail sinew]

https://tenor.com/view/puff-cheeks-gif-9422522

[timber bay]

Cute but _holds you at gunpoint _ feedback bbg 🥰🥰

[trail sinew]

i am already dead

[sly grove]

https://tenor.com/view/buried-dirt-goodbye-ray-donovan-liev-schreiber-gif-5576502

[trail sinew]

ardent riches interesting.

ok, good poem.

now study.

[naive rapids]

Study, Jane

[timber bay]

@trail sinew @naive rapids I write a poem spending so much thoughts in it in my free time and this is what I get in return. Thank you for ruining both my academic and poetic motivation

[low warren]

Dude

[trail sinew]

thanks, i hope you return the favor. (take a hint, im mad at you)

[low warren]

Wth is up with your vocab

I had to google half the words

Thanks for increasing my vocab

[trail sinew]

skill issue /j

[sly grove]

Btw

What if you

[low warren]

Tomorrow I'll look up the meaning of the words again and read it more properly!

[sly grove]

Awaken the musical-
The woodwinds of agony,
The enraged congress.

Awaken the symphony-
Woodwinds of agony,
An enraged assembly.
🤔

@timber bay

[trail sinew]

I am not against the use of complex words and phrases. But the thing is, greatest things are often simple.

[low warren]

Everyone has their own style. If they can make complexity work, then that's amazing

But yes

[trail sinew]

I am not against the use of complex words and phrases.

litterally.

bruh.

[low warren]

It is a bit more difficult to feel deep emotions from complexity

[trail sinew]

i personally understood it.

[low warren]

Understanding and feeling are two different things

[trail sinew]

I ins't/

it isn't.

they are related.

[sly grove]

Owned amongst malice of ancient love and lore;

Entwined with the malice of ancient love and lore;
@timber bay 🤔

[low warren]

Ehh not for me^^

[trail sinew]

Agreeing to disagree.

[low warren]

Mhm

[trail sinew]

but the stonehearted person i am (i guess i am a tsundere or something?), i gave this a 7.2/10.

[low warren]

Tbh i personally admire those who write with such complex vocabulary because it's something I cannot do myself

I focus more on simple stuff so it's pretty tough for me to write something like this

So it's like

"wow, we can do this??"

[low warren]

That's not so bad

[trail sinew]

read my bio dude.

[naive rapids]

Me and my irl friend yesterday decided to write poems alongside each other. She isn't much of a poet, but I enjoy reading her simplistic yet joyful poetry

Simplistic can be great, and complex can be great as well :> obviously

[trail sinew]

who disagreed dude.

[naive rapids]

Talking to Fire

[trail sinew]

I am fire.

So, yeah.

[naive rapids]

The vocab is beyond me, but this is amazing

[trail sinew]

(honestly, i like it.)

(beautiful imagery, and good words. And nice flow for the most part.)

(7.2 still)

[sly grove]

So as i was saying @timber bay …….

[timber bay]

Yes I've seen your suggestions. I think the 'Awaken the musical...The enraged congress' part stays because I think Enraged kind of goes with Congress from a political pov (rebellious thoughts). I'll consider the Entwined with malice of ancient love and lore portion, that's a great suggestion! Thanks!

[sly grove]

I’m glad it helped 😌

At this point it’s a perfect mix of artistic expression & sacrifice 👌🏻

[ashen isle]

I absolutely adore your vocabulary 🙂 I have no criticism to share, you did a phenomenal job! Keep it up! 😄

[timber bay]

Thanks ♡

[timber bay]

Appreciate it ♡♡

[timber bay]

Lmao welcome

[timber bay]

@rocky rock

[rocky rock]

i genuinely believe you sit with a thesaurus and/or dictionary in your process I'm OBSESSED with your rich vocabulary 😭 totally different style to me and yet you're easily one of my favourite poets here , so much talent ❤️

"thorns are sweetest in arms of rose" chills

[sinful trellis]

I am in love with this

I swear your vocab, way of wording is just so amazing

[gusty talon]

Wow your vocabulary is always immaculate

[bitter idol]

You always write so well💜

[timber bay]

Thank you! (And yes I do lol)

[timber bay]

I'm glad you liked it!

[timber bay]

♡♡

[timber bay]

@lavish elbow

[timber bay]

@left vector

[timber bay]

@lavish elbow

[frank wraith]

the opera of imagination AHHH genius!! genius!!

love it so so much

[timber bay]

Thank you ♡

[lavish elbow]

damn bro you have a lot of vocab

I can't even make that without having a thesaurus with me 🤣

awesome poem bro

9.6/10 ❤️

[timber bay]

lol thanks

[timber bay]

@spark lagoon

[timber bay]

@grave scaffold

[timber bay]

@molten wadi what did you pin?

[molten wadi]

The poem, Jane. <3

[timber bay]

OHH

[timber bay]

@unborn mica

[timber bay]

@fading nacelle

[timber bay]

@echo holly

[novel chasm]

HOW YOU WRITE IN THIS WAY DEAR? NICE POEM JANE, with a lot of love rico.

[sage brook]

*HOW YOU WRITE IN THIS

WAY DEAR? NICE POEM JANE, with a

lot of love rico.*

- 🌙♡ Rico The Perfect ♤💙