#Cellist Oubliette

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chrome cove
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Cellist Oubliette

He bowed and then bowed,
a
bow
in
his
hair
He
bowed and bowed,

Bowed and bowed

His bow pointing up then it dove like a dove.

Rose up, rising comprising of 
Sewn wind

wound round a wound

That wind, that wind

Tears on finger tips and tears on faces of

Does his audience, cry, live and living

Bass his catch

In a banned wedding
band he played
Bearing out barely
He bowed and then bowed
Bowed and then bowed

Rings of the
banned wedding band ring, rang out

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So close a performance, so close

He bowed and he bowed,
plucked the bow from his hair.

As he bowed and bowed.

Tears on
finger tips from bowing

tears
on his face from
sowed, sowed
piglets on the ground
His audience content with his content

Encore once more, hogged
refuse to end,
refuse wanted
recycled…….. a dessert,

no empty desert to close

To desert his stage.

So accept his fine, except he's not fine

Minute by minute minute, by minute minute of acsent to an accented finish so close too close to close just yet.

So he bows and he bows a little longer

Wound wound down, wind down to close

He bows.

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@bronze apex

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@fiery sonnet

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The idea here being to make a poem that's incredibly difficult to recite using homonyms.

bronze apex
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@chrome cove i call dibs on narration.

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You did it

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Ngl turkey people be sleeping on your poetry bro

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You got some crazy stuff

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@carmine cape @carmine cape @fleet oracle

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Give this the love it deserves guys

chrome cove
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It should be very, very difficult

bronze apex
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Or

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Very easy

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It’s like

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A rooftop

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For a freerunner

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Find your own route yk

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Many different possibilities

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To annoy you

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It’s abit like chess

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@chrome cove

chrome cove
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I'm sure you'll nail it.

carmine cape
oblique loom
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this word play was INSANE i love it

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i know your goal was to abuse the hell out of homonyms but the imagery you created was so vivid, i could see the performance play out clearly in my mind !!!! this was so lovely

chrome cove
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@desert island

desert island
desert island
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The meaning adds more depths

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Of the title

tiny niche
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It's really impressive that you actually managed to recite it while remembering how to recite the right words lmao

mental oasis
carmine cape
mental oasis
mental barn
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Amazing play of words. On another level man!

trail sage
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At a single failure, the reader must start over.

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One wrong syllable = immediate restart.

soft shale
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I had the joy of hearing you read this, a challenging one for sure.

soft shale
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Not perfect, but a fun read through. catbop

west vault
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The way you speak makes you sound like a poet, which is a compliment. I, on the other hand, sound like a dying rat. That makes 2 Fluffs that are very different.

soft shale
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Thank you. I am still sick (have been for a week).. and I was reading slowly to not cough and not trip over the words!

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I have heard about you @west vault !! We finally meet. -high five-

west vault
soft shale