I wrote you this flower

[meager heart]

-pieristheartist

@true perch

[true perch]

you know what i was about to critique the last line for not being 5 syllables but I've just realised was that intentional?? cuz the "not perfect"?? i love it for that even if it wasn't 😭 ❤️

[meager heart]

:)

it was

gj noticing

what do u think it means?

[true perch]

the poem? i can think of two things: the acknowledgement that there are parallels between poetry and nature ("wrote you this flower") and the acknowledgement that gifts do not have to be perfect to be as beautiful as a flower (:

[meager heart]

i like that :)

thanks

[true perch]

tag it in #🖇・poetry-feedback-help ;3

[meager heart]

i dont need help XDD

but for me it's my poems are like love

i give it to people as a flower

[true perch]

gets people to read it tbh

[meager heart]

and it's not perfect

but its enough

and people dont need to be perfect to be loved

yeah

[meager heart]

looool fine

maybe later

[true perch]

up to you :3

[meager heart]

ye

[meager heart]

what u think

of my explanation

[true perch]

it's pretty (:

[meager heart]

:p

ok

XD

[cinder hedge]

pretty!

[meager heart]

ty :3

@rich acorn

[rich acorn]

oh I like it!

simple but very touching pieris

[rich acorn]

keep it up!!

[meager heart]

ty fedya :)