#Only The Darkness Never Ends.

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Wallowing in peace;
Which fills the half empty cups
Of my blissful soul.
Love smitten with my life;
Leads me into the embrace of a loving wife.
Spending days in less than no pain.
Days like this are as likely—
As upside-down rain;
And an upside-down frown on my face.

Damnable, I must be;
For the heavens drowned—
Just to prove my ill-fated destiny.
The food i eat,
Shoves down, like spines against my throat.
The water seeps into my heart;
But like oil,
It floats on the sea of an everlasting despair...
And dims out the last shred of sunlight—
That paved through the layers.

I've lost the sails of my ship;
And I wander uncontrollably into the darkness—
With a candle, which only brightens up the horrifying present
And leaves a trail of smoke——
Which blurs my future;
Which the pleasant past follows to taunt my present.

Beyond all of the light, oh so great and holy!
It ends;
And only darkness remains.
Beyond all of the wise and ornate words that seek to give life, meaning.
It ends;
And only death remains.
In all the beauty which lies in the world—
In the end;
It lies in the grave
And the ugly walk in perpetual haze;
Of the dusk that will never dawn upon them.

Perhaps..
It is penance that they serve;
Suffering for eternity.
Maybe...
It is the end, that brings value to the journey.
How damnable must they be;
For even death refused to bring them peace.

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@clever sinew

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@honest parcel

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@thorn smelt

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@main bolt

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@fallen raptor

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@shy vessel

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@shell yacht

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@tranquil geyser

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I liked this one more than I expected

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But i still think

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I could've made this into something better

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That's a cool title

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Woah

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When did you get so good

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Middle line of the second stanza, shove should be shoved I think

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I will have to step up

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Your first line of this poem is excellent

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@tame sinew
@rustic cloak

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Waittt omggg

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How did I forget kenzy

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No wait i didn't

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I'm blind

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@cyan cedar

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I LOVED THIS ONE! The title is so cool and the last stanza was amazing, I love the ending line

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I swear the best poems have an amazing end line/stanza

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shell yacht
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# shell yacht Np! have you seen my new poems?

I sure have!! I'm sorry I didn't have much time to say anything about them.
But don't worry, I read every poem you tag me in so keep tagging me.
Each of your poems is more amazing than the last

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Btw

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This poem

shell yacht
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I got the motivation to write this after reading your poem

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So thank you

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specifically if u cant remember its ok

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Like some words and phrases that I read just snapped something in me like damn

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Not necessarily the theme

shell yacht
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But rather the style and word choices

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thorn smelt
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@vestal trout

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@vestal trout

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i will read later and say.

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@full cloak^^

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Shoved down like spines in my throat doesn't really make sense, it sounds like it's missing the word there's or something similar to bridge the two ideas together

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The food feels like spines

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Against rather than in may work better

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@unborn fjord

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@rustic cloak one of my best

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@keen meteor

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@whole beacon like the issue which bothers me is like, most of my poems are about some philosophical stuff like life or death, or love, just in different ways each time

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Wait lemme get a love poem as well

old quartz
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I shall read

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It's a bit old so yeah it's one of the worse ones

old quartz
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But its deep !

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Like the sea

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old quartz
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Idk abut technicall stuff me being a newbie and all
But this poem has a haunting vibe

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Neat

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I just write whatever feels best

old quartz
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Ohh good that i got it then

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Mhm mhm i write by feeling too

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You'll have lost the original feeling behind your thoughts

old quartz