#Tip..Tip..Tip…

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brave moat
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@molten atlas

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@unreal arrow

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@fallen coral

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@spring glade

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@onyx tapir

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@harsh jasper

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@fervent turret

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@sage lichen

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@left kestrel

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@quiet hare

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@tribal wadi

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@silent nacelle

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@meager sphinx

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@reef hollow

granite umbra
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O.M.G. I FLUFFING LOVE THIS!!! this was so sweet of you blursob🩷

brave moat
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@granite umbra

molten atlas
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As a rain lover catlove . The imagery ON POINT. "Enough writing this poem" was the most relatable lmaoo.

brave moat
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@opaque mango

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@white pagoda

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@granite umbra

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@wispy kiln

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@hard mason

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@solid scaffold

brave moat
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@cloud pebble

ebon spindle
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beautifull

copper frigateBOT
brave moat
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@solid scaffold

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@tired brook

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@sly perch

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@oak oriole

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@solemn kettle

solemn kettle
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For the knife of addiction pierced my skin, my heart burned in love for being a reader rather than a writer for the very first time. Pray my pardon, thy shower of poetry made me feel alive.

white pagoda
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i love the ending specially, where you leap into the rain; it ties everything together beautifully, making it a poetic celebration of life amidst chaos. great work!

brave moat
brave moat
white pagoda
fallen coral
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I love this so much. SaberSaysPretty The imagery is so realistic yet at the same time it's as if in a dream. The 'tip's made me feel as though it were actually rain and I could just hear it if I try hard enough. As I have said before, your way of words are so beautiful and wonderful for readers to read. At the 'A humble poet trying to live hundred lifetimes in one short little life.' I can't help but imagine the 'hundred lifetimes' as each raindrop, some plentiful with experiences and moments, some smaller droplets, still a gem in it's own way. As well as 'one short little life' as this moment it's raining. And the ending just ends the poem so nicely. Oh and the way the city was described, it just can't get even better, but it does. I feel as though I'm starting to get obsessed at this ratecattucry

brave moat
fallen coral
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I'm ded half the time to be fairimfinepotat, but I'm honored

brave moat
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😅 why ?

fallen coral
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I try to look around for inspiration for poems half the time, and I just sit staring at a wall doing nothing the other half. But I do read your poems when they are posted tho

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Love reading them

brave moat
brave moat
fallen coral
brave moat
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Just write

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Logical or ill-logical

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Doesn’t matter

fallen coral
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makes sense, I'll try that then catwave

untold drumBOT
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[ :e: Removed by @harshk0472 ]

quiet hare
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The air is thick with the scent
of damp & dust,
A murmur of thunder in the distance,
A growl from the belly of,
fluffy marshmallows up there.
People shuffle faster, heads down,
eyes darting to the horizon,
waiting for the first strike. I really like the first couple stanzas

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quite vivid imagery you painted here or in this one specifically

left kestrel
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Eyy this is an amazing poem! I love this so much!

brave moat
spring glade
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I am so late, but this is so good!

wispy kiln
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once again love the scenery!!

solid scaffold
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I really love this
Also I'm sorry for not responding to any lately I've had a lot going on. But, they are all really good poems, as always 💜

brave moat
tribal wadi
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omg this is amazing!!

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loving the imaagery harshk!

brave moat
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Thank you so much 😊

onyx tapir
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Beautiful !! I smelled petrichor reading this

brave moat
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How are you doing dear ?

onyx tapir
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Hehehe crazy crazy busy 😭 my 9-5 eats up way more hours than intended

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I’m carving out time for here though! Lots of poems to read

brave moat
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You have a business & a 9to5

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Damn

onyx tapir
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I’m a bit of a workaholic lol

brave moat
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Btw what do you do ? (If you don’t mind me asking)

onyx tapir
brave moat
onyx tapir
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Office work, nothing very glamorous lol