#The Derelict Stranger -Jane

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@devout lintel

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@brazen flower

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@flat notch

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@fluid python

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@weary lance

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@zealous roost

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@unkempt oriole

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@novel minnow

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@hollow atlas

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@old breach

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@mint tree

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@weak portal

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The Derelict Stranger -Jane

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@sonic obsidian

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@carmine crow

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@zinc pond

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@halcyon lion

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@boreal arrow

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@opal orchid

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@hollow junco

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@inner summit

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@floral gulch

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@opal orchid

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@opal orchid

unkempt oriole
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interesting.

flat notch
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This is another great poem of yours! You have perfectly used great symbolic imagery to portray the working class man and his work to restore and create new of the old kingdom

unkempt oriole
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analysis.

The poem is sterning on the point of "light" and in the end, "sound". And it is quite as interesting piece.

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The first and second para is like the birth of the king or prince or royalty is general.

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flat notch
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Seems like another poet today has wrote about a poem to do with royalty and high and low social norms…

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Thats interesting, contemplating themes of power, beauty, decay & the legacy of leadership. That too with rich imagery & evocative language, you are basically inviting readers to delve deeper into meanings & implications of the very way society is structured. 👌🏻

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granite crowBOT
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*Ahaha I see!

I think I started my poem

a few weeks ago*

- summersami
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devout lintel
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Lmao

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devout lintel
flat notch
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@granite crow ….

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@granite crow turn this into a haiku please! I beg of you!

devout lintel
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🤣

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@weak yoke

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flat notch
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I really like the title too, how you have fixed the man in this role as a ‘stranger’ as if he is not supposed to have the role of rebuilding such a royal place due to his low social class, as well how he is unaware of such high class possessions

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this is such a pretty poem jane!, this is my first time reading one of your works... and i'm impressed, you're so talented, and pretty🌹 🌹

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hollow mountain
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I LOVE YOUR VOCABULARY WHAT THE HELL, especially cuz I'm passionate about advocating for the lower classes, it's beautiful !!

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weak yoke
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Okay its Jane's poem Im sure its fire🙏🏻🔥🔥🔥

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"The chimera of daylight
Crumbled at dawn.
A tattered great dynasty
Of pearl-crest’d swans." THE IMAGERY?

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THE IMGERY WENT CRAZYY

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chimera has got to be my new favourite word because what the hell, what a word

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hollow junco
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Absolutely stunning and speechless.

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zealous roost
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*With wiles and colours
It flourished and frayed;
He wove a tapestry
‘Till his iris grayed. * 🫰

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Amazing! As usual your poems are really good Jane, i love this one

zinc pond
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youre the queen of rhyme and metre. really nice read!!

carmine crow
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This is beautiful,I love it
(Also like I told others I apologize for not responding lately to pings I've had a lot going on) But they are all really good I enjoy them 💜

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