#blood-tinted pink flag!! (it's a femininomenon)

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sacred summit
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I'm hyperfocusing deep in your twitching retinas.
I'm holding a breath every time you mention her.
And I'm loathing in my petulance
When you mention that girl.

You're missing out on something magical.
I'm unhinged and difficult but really is that illegal?!
I'm hoping you see me for what I am.
A chance to right the wrongs and make amends.

Please leave that tall glass of Disani water.
Before I dump her out and fill you with myself.

I am not just a friend who can lend an open ear.
I can't be bought, but I'd really like her to disappear.
And every time I see you, I want to be near you.
Perhaps superglued, or better (worse): be you!

I am sane and perfectly normal about you.
I am aware of my perpetual usage of "you".
Filling my mind with fantasies so divine.
I'll make you mine! At worst, I'll take your life!!

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@silent hinge @steady quail @velvet sedge @worthy acorn

quasi plover
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OMMGG????

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Damn, this is something

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Does have some extremes and irrationalities

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Which ofc ik u said you don't believe in, NO WORRIES

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So amazing, well done Lala SLAYYYYY

sacred summit
worthy acorn
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the disappear rhyme is so cool

mint ledge
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omg this poem is full of intense and powerful emotions, with u expressing a deep and possessive love for the person u are addressing

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the way u use of "twitching retinas," "holding a breath," and "petulance" in the first stanza, gives a sense of obsession and fixation, and the repetition of "you" reinforces ur focus on the recipient

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and the final lines take a dark turn, with u expressing a desire to possess and even take the life of the other person, kinda adding a sense of danger and menace to the overall tone👍

sacred summit
velvet sedge
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Who will hyper focus on my twitching retinas 😹 (nobody)

sacred summit