Holding onto you | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 7:58 PM

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@outer python
@fast oracle

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@plain pike

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This was a quick poem

plain pike Jul 26, 2024, 8:00 PM

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Kevssss

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 8:00 PM

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rosyyy

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im so sleepy

fast oracle Jul 26, 2024, 8:14 PM

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glass patio im so sleepy

Come to my bed then 😳

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GUYS WAKEUO KEVIN JUST POSTED this this this this this this this this

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This poem right here

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Brought me joy

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Brought me life

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Brought me

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Everything

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 8:15 PM

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I saved ur life

fast oracle Jul 26, 2024, 8:15 PM

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If u don't star this poem kya and consider yourself as an opp

wheat hornetBOT Jul 26, 2024, 8:15 PM

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*If u don't star this

poem kya and consider

yourself as an opp*

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 8:15 PM

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HELLP

fast oracle Jul 26, 2024, 8:16 PM

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WHAY

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IMS HAKESPSEARE

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 8:16 PM

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U ARE HAKESPEARS

fast oracle Jul 26, 2024, 8:16 PM

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gun guys read this poem and star ut

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thatsNARVirl

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 8:17 PM

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BESTIE

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can u ples ples ples delete that the mods will find u

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🦅🎠🎠🤭🤭🤭🤭😋🤞

fast oracle Jul 26, 2024, 8:20 PM

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OK FINE 😒😳😒😘😒😒😘😘😒

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 8:20 PM

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https://tenor.com/view/dante-devil-may-cry-dmc-rose-gif-13281062

Tenor

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 9:39 PM

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@past talon
@languid whale
@fickle stag

plain pike Jul 26, 2024, 9:41 PM

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I forgot I was reading this- you used your rhyme scheme very well, beautiful depth and lovely word choices, very easy poem to read 💜

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 9:43 PM

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plain pike I forgot I was reading this- you used your rhyme scheme very well, beautiful dep...

the next one is purely free verse

glass patio Jul 26, 2024, 10:14 PM

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@slate arrow

warm elm Jul 27, 2024, 12:21 AM

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glass patio can u ples ples ples delete that the mods will find u

Nothing escapes us.

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:3

lost echo Jul 27, 2024, 2:26 AM

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@fast oracle easy on the implicit threats for starring ; P bit hardcore, we mods have to read that you know! lol

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@glass patio any feedback you're looking for perhaps? ❤️ LOVED THIS POEM! Nice elision too ❤️

glass patio Jul 27, 2024, 4:32 AM

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lost echo <@842339529045835786> any feedback you're looking for perhaps? ❤️ LOVED THIS POE...

SURE! I wrote this poem quite quickly last night, and i was pretty sleepy, so I'd love to hear some feedback on if it's good or needs some improvement :>

fast oracle Jul 27, 2024, 8:08 AM

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lost echo <@1234185572596187146> easy on the implicit threats for starring ; P bit hardcor...

I'm sorry

glass patio Jul 27, 2024, 10:13 AM

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@hollow dragon hope ya been okay lately btw and not too busy ✨ been a while

hollow dragon Jul 27, 2024, 10:22 AM

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I absolutely loved the rhymes in this

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Like

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Way too good

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Overall amazing poem. This is one of my most enjoyable reads in a while

glass patio Jul 27, 2024, 10:23 AM

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:D tyvm firee :>

hollow dragon Jul 27, 2024, 10:23 AM

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Didn't feel tiring

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Like most poems nowadays

glass patio Jul 27, 2024, 10:24 AM

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hollow dragon I absolutely loved the rhymes in this

the other one i pinged u in is very much free verse, just a heads up

hollow dragon Jul 27, 2024, 10:24 AM

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Free verse is even better 🔥

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I'll read the other ones soon

glass patio Jul 27, 2024, 10:24 AM

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hollow dragon Didn't feel tiring

also im very glad it was enjoyable and easy to read

wheat hornetBOT Jul 27, 2024, 10:24 AM

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*also im very

glad it was enjoyable

and easy to read*

glass patio Jul 27, 2024, 10:24 AM

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<3

hollow dragon Jul 27, 2024, 10:24 AM

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❤️

#Holding onto you