This poem is absolutely phenomenal!! I loved the theme, and the structure is likewise very unique and notable. The theme is emotionally resonant, I love it! 😄 Amazing job, and keep it up! ❤️
#"Ephemeral" -- Tempest.
thick relic
Although, what's with that (plaything)?
I was thinking of fate as a person, and the "I" in the poem was more of a toy, a mere actor, or puppet that is only there for Fate's amusement
"I" could be tossed away like a toy anytime the play ends
Just like how children play with dolls, if you get what I mean
thick relic
This poem is absolutely phenomenal!! I loved the theme, and the structure is lik...
thank you for the feed back
autumn bronze
I was thinking of fate as a person, and the "I" in the poem was more of a toy, a...
Ah, I see
That's very creative
At first thought, it felt like an "explanation" of the word that came before it, which I wasn't a big fan of
This is much better 🙂
thick relic
At first thought, it felt like an "explanation" of the word that came before it,...
ohhh
autumn bronze
You may tag me in more of your poems, if you'd like, this was truly a delight to read
Although I'm not very consistent with giving feedback nowadays...
thick relic
it's fine, I'm not consistent with writing poetry these days 
Just came back from a long break
But as long as you enjoy reading it, I'm delighted
autumn bronze
Yeah, I also wrote a poem just a few days ago after having written nothing in weeks
I get that
thick relic
mind sharing? I would love to read it
autumn bronze
My latest one? Sure 🙂
It's far from my best one, but the theme is pretty unique, I would say
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