METAMORPHOSIS OF MIND

[balmy jackal]

it's way too good, than i care to admit!! simple, easy to read and with great concept.

[zealous imp]

Thank you so much!! I am grateful that u cared to give it a read and well, liked it too..thanks alot:))

[zealous imp]

https://discord.com/channels/944439929734312006/1266285202510970881 if u want ,u can give it a read too, hope u would like this one too:)))

@gaunt zephyr @zinc maple @versed geyser @unkempt heart not trying to be selfish here but i would love u guys to read this one too...i mean if u guys want to:))

[unkempt heart]

I’ve always been a little bit a of a sucker for the narrators voice in a story driven poem. This is a nice poem about a man passing his ideas about love to a young woman. Very pretty nice work

[zealous imp]

thank you so much!! It really feels good to be acknowledged by someone whose work you adore yourself:)))

[versed geyser]

I really liked this poem :>>

the imagery on the first 2 lines of the little girl sitting on the bench crying and u approaching her is powerful and sets the tone for the poem

and the conversation between u and the girl is really poignant and really captures the innocence and vulnerability of the girl🥹

and ur response to the girl's question abt love is really wise and impactful, and I love how the poem ends with the girl walking away with a newfound sense of determination too

Overall it's a beautiful and thought provoking piece, very nice