This is an excerpt from a chapter named "The Scars of Us", from my novel The Retrospection. This is my first time sharing a prose here so I hope you enjoy.
#The Scars Of Us (prose)(an excerpt from The Retrospection)
sullen bluff
@mint silo
@frail cloak
@plucky goblet
@kind matrix
@fierce surge
@upbeat marlin
@sage grail
@sweet frost
@fading forge
@chilly lark
@lament ermine
@dusty canopy
@finite compass
@wind night
@kind matrix
@charred lodge
@wanton verge
@narrow pike
@red ore
@midnight leaf
@snow wyvern
@pastel arrow
@kind matrix
@glad yacht @sharp crane
frail cloak
damm you write novels too nice, this was quite good
mint silo
There’s something oddly pleasing about the psychedelic feeling that inhumane darkness ensconces you in 👌🏻
sullen bluff
@fiery pivot
fiery pivot
sullen bluff
damm you write novels too nice, this was quite good
Heh thanks
midnight leaf
you know your poetry is powerful when it disturbs someone else
overall this was an awesome read Jane!!!
sullen bluff
you know your poetry is powerful when it disturbs someone else
It's actually a short excerpt from my novel The Retrospection.
wanton steepleBOT
sullen bluff
overall this was an awesome read Jane!!!
Also, Thank you!
sullen bluff
Thanks to you too, love
midnight leaf
It's actually a short excerpt from my novel The Retrospection.
oh oh my bad 
you are good at this!
sullen bluff
@knotty heron ..tis not a poem but-
knotty heron
<@1221155704698572882> ..tis not a poem but-
Okeh wowwwhh, for a moment I thought Juliette Ferras is talking to me. The inner war of letting the worst part of you in wild play or to put it in shackles and in between this, the urge to even save it....omg you have portrayed it so well. if you ever write a novel, I am gonna read it. YOU HAVE MY WORDS!!!...
sullen bluff
Okeh wowwwhh, for a moment I thought Juliette Ferras is talking to me. The inner...
Thanks a lottt. And I have written a novel. This is an excerpt from that novel
knotty heron
Thanks a lottt. And I have written a novel. This is an excerpt from that novel
Is it published?! I would love to read it
sullen bluff
Is it published?! I would love to read it
Not yet. I had to postpon the publishing for reasons. I'll definitely get to you first when its out!
fading forge
Damnnnnn
This is beautiful, and hauntingly relatable. It’s true, there is something oddly pleasing of being pushed into darkness for so long.
Can you ping me when your book comes out? I’d love to buy a copy. What is it called?
sullen bluff
Damnnnnn
This is beautiful, and hauntingly relatable. It’s true, there is somet...
Thanks a bunch! Its called THE RETROSPECTION
sullen bluff
@old cosmos
glad yacht
This was oddly comforting in some ways. If this is part of a book you'll be releasing, I'll gladly buy a copy! Your writing is truly one of a kind.
pastel arrow
Damnnnnn
This is beautiful, and hauntingly relatable. It’s true, there is somet...
I believe it is that you don't spend time worrying about the fluff, among other reasons.
There's still a lot of fluff here.
I like the question and answer at both ends.
pastel arrow
This is an excerpt from a chapter named "The Scars of Us", from my novel The Ret...
Mmm, interesting. What is it about?
sullen bluff
Mmm, interesting. What is it about?
Sci-fi, thriller, dystopian politics
And mystery
pastel arrow
Have you published any book before?
sullen bluff
No. Its my first
pastel arrow
I used to write novels too, but I scrapped all of them. Every single piece of data.
pastel arrow
No. Its my first
Ok, good luck
sullen bluff
I used to write novels too, but I scrapped all of them. Every single piece of da...
I see
sullen bluff
Ok, good luck
Thanks
pastel arrow
Also, without the subtext provided by the story, this feels like there's a lot of bloat. I'm sure there would be way better impressions if we had the rest of the story. So... remember to publish your book.
sullen bluff
Also, without the subtext provided by the story, this feels like there's a lot o...
Lmao yeah. There's indeed a lot. I'll keep posting snips like this here sometimes tho.
charred lodge
Went so deep that I forgot it started off as a conversation. I love how it's simple enough to understand well but the use of words still feels powerful. Did I get a little lost about what time we were in in the middle since it changes quite a bit, yes! Might that also have to do with my horrible attention span, probably! Hahaha
wind night
You're so dark it's soooo good kudosss✨
sullen bluff
Went so deep that I forgot it started off as a conversation. I love how it's sim...
Hehe ♡
sullen bluff
You're so dark it's soooo good kudosss✨
Thankss
sullen bluff
ARE YOU OK LUVE?
I AM AWESOME RICO THANKS FOR ASKING!
sullen bluff
@arctic saffron
arctic saffron
Your poem is deeply evocative and poignant, exploring themes of trauma, internal struggle, and the complex relationship with darkness. This is a very intense piece of writing.
sullen bluff
Your poem is deeply evocative and poignant, exploring themes of trauma, internal...
Its an excerpt from my book-
arctic saffron
Its an excerpt from my book-
Oh, which book?
sullen bluff
Oh, which book?
Its called The Retrospection (tentative)
arctic saffron
Its called The Retrospection (tentative)
Nice. That's really great! All the best for the book.
sullen bluff
Nice. That's really great! All the best for the book.
Thanks!
sullen bluff
@obsidian quartz
wanton verge
This was amazing, I like your style !
sullen bluff
@kind matrix
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@narrow pike