#Peasant's Park

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obtuse plume
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So far away beneath the Blue and Dime:
A ring of golden brown of noble’s crowns.
With sun and cinder, hide all sin with chime,
Reflects in lake ripples like silver gowns.

So long beneath the Bark and carpet Moss:
Let be the flower beds like roads of Oz.
Some bees twirl by earth's worms on damp soil gloss,
And dozen ducks watch’ed with an applause.

But on a limping bench disturbed by mould,
Lies a melting stone Soul so petrified.
Caved fingers with lips, colour bleached so cold,
The sun tempts skin - leaving rock ossified.

Once the moon cries its worth, and sun goes dry,
Will clouds crack the Earth, or moss moist the Eye?

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Shakespearean sonnet I wrote for a competition with the theme ‘The world through your eyes’ :)

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@keen cradle 👍

keen cradle
obtuse plume
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Thanks! ^~^ Yee the melody definitely is a bit all over the place in this one (I focused far too much into getting the structure of the poem right rather than the flow of it), so goodluck but don't stress over it if it becomes too funky to deal with! 💙

weak hollowBOT
keen cradle
obtuse plume
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Oh my goodness hehe :D I'm glad you're having fun Bezirk ;3 <3 Goodluck!

keen cradle
obtuse plume
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Up to you! :)

hollow dawn
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This is truly a remarkable sonnet. And the imagery is just so pleasant and cute! And great use of words :3

I, but another duck, applaud you 👏

obtuse plume
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Hehe thank you Kevs! ^~^ That's really kind of you <3

keen cradle
weak hollowBOT
keen cradle
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@obtuse plume im finished :) Im so excited to share it !

obtuse plume
keen cradle
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i think it works best if you download it and let it play in the background, discord is not letting me play in continously ... :(

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Maybe you can also spot the little easter egg i put in :)

obtuse plume
obtuse plume
keen cradle
obtuse plume
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Oooo I hear it now! :D Hehehe ;3 <3