Ode to Colm Hanley

[plain furnace]

Ode to Colm Hanley

I know a Golden Bumblebee,
Who speaks a thousand words -
Where sun is bleached and joys’ not free,
With hum he raises birds.

With every flower that he sprouts,
And every bee he meets -
His nectar nurtures any draughts,
And sticks to souls like sweets!

And when the blossoms bloom anew,
And colours fill my sea -
I’m glad, I knew, in our pursue,
A Golden Bumblebee.

[onyx garnet]

I love the flow and melodical style of it, im kinda tempted to compose a little melody to this xD

[quick dove]

Wonderful! @onyx garnet has just pregressed to level 1!

[grand garnet]

yeah this is a nice poem, i wrote so many bee poems already, this makes me want to write another one

[plain furnace]

:o

Ohhh

I can't reply to peeps

That's why message got deleted

Got it o7

@onyx garnet

Wait

Huh

Alright well thank you both very much anyhow <3 Don't understand how posts work yet without having my message be deleted...

[onyx garnet]

ill let you know when im finished im kinda thrilled rn xD

[plain furnace]

Yeah I was trying to say that in my message to you! Please lemme know if you write it :D

And Vindicator do it 🫵 We stan the bees

[grand garnet]

some words may get flagged, cuz the bot may detect a bad word or something though it may not be intentional, yeah

[plain furnace]

ahh

That's what I was trying to say

I'm guessing it's probably foot ;3

Or? Not sure

[grand garnet]

its emily last name, cuz I typed it before and it deletes it

[plain wyvern]

*its emily last

name, cuz I typed it before

and it deletes it*

- vardomc.

[plain furnace]

Ohhhhhh

Got it :D

[grand garnet]

😭

[plain furnace]

Hehehe ;)

[quick dove]

Wonderful! @plain furnace has just pregressed to level 1!

[plain furnace]

Thank you very much <3

Shall stay clear of the forbidden Emily 🫡

[grand garnet]

np! would you like to see a poem from me ?

[plain furnace]

Ooo yeah please! I'd love to :o

[onyx garnet]

i got the key melody already, gonna add some chords now

[plain furnace]

:o Goodluck! 💙

[onyx garnet]

finished it :)

still room for improvement, please let me know what you think of it :D

[plain furnace]

Holy Hell Bezirk that is beautiful! :D Oh my goodness I was smiling the entire time while reading along ;3

That is actually incredible, thank you so much <3

Actually wild how good that sounds ;D hehe

[onyx garnet]

Thank you so much! at the moment a computer is playing it, i wonder how it would sound if someone could actually play this :) sadly i dont have a piano

[plain furnace]

Aww I sees 💙 It's gorgeous anyhow <3

Funkin @ me next time you post a poem and/or melody 🫵 I'd love to hear it 💚

[onyx garnet]

Thank you so much again! I normally dont compose a lot, but when i read your poem I just had too ;) I hopefully get someone to play this on a real piano

[plain furnace]

Hehe well I appreciate it extra much then ;3 <3

[onyx garnet]

Also hit me up when u write something again like this, the wording and everything just makes it so good to compose :)
Ill gladly help you out with another melody on your next one

[plain furnace]

^~^ Will do! <3

[plain furnace]

:o I do actually have one more poem that's properly written with foot and meter, specifically a Shakespearean sonnet.
The 10 syllables per line makes it bit rough to get the proper rhythm going ;) But I can share it anyhow

[onyx garnet]

sure, ping me there :)